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20 most recent comments by wilco (61-80) and replies

Re: San Franscisco by John Rambo 22-May-06/8:28 PM
That's funny
Re: Descendent by MacFrantic 22-May-06/8:26 PM
Damn, that's a lot of rhyming...I hate that, but I guess I like it well enough for the words themselves.
Re: Godproof Hat by Dovina 22-May-06/8:24 PM
I wish I had a God-proof hat. I always feel like He's watching me. Nice limerick.

On an unrelated topic, I'm ure glad I came back in time to see the return of Rockmage.
Re: You can go no further. by Dovina 11-May-06/4:01 PM
What's this about the demise of the Ranker? I know I've been away, but that's no reason to close up shop ;)

Re: The Right Call by Dovina 21-Mar-06/7:44 PM
mmmm...okay.
Re: Life Is Like A Rose by x0lovelylarnx0 21-Mar-06/7:42 PM
Good thoughts, but it's all been said before and in a much better way. Try looking for new ways to express your thoughts. Instead of just letting it flow onto the page, think about the line and think how you can say it in a different way.
Re: Muff by Stephen Robins 21-Mar-06/7:39 PM
"I swear I saw an ewok, Grinning between your legs," is the funniest thing I've ever heard. 8 - just for that.
Re: One Too Many by ElmoBeavisButthead 21-Mar-06/7:35 PM
I don't really think I can give you any better advice than Ranger already has. Follow his lead.
Re: a comment on Dashboard Jesus by wilco 19-Mar-06/4:42 PM
Line 3 seems to have given me all kinds of fits...I guess that's the peril of writing at 3AM.
Re: Judged by Dovina 19-Mar-06/1:40 AM
Hey, I'm back. Excited?
Re: Martijn by Chasz Misleading 19-Mar-06/1:36 AM
I think you misspelled Martin's name.

Seriously, though folks. I think if you want to poast this for others to read, maybe shorten it and make it a little more interesting. Otherwise just give it to Martijn.
Re: Indiscrete by ecargo 19-Mar-06/1:33 AM
super
Re: Looking Back by x0lovelylarnx0 19-Mar-06/1:25 AM
Some good sentiments, but just not a very...ummm..daring? poem..just not too inventive...could be worked on and turned into something though.
Re: Mid-July by Ranger 19-Mar-06/1:20 AM
I likes..you shall have a 9.
Re: Louwanda by Jeremi B. Handrinos 19-Mar-06/1:11 AM
babies havin' babies..
Re: Conflict Resolution by Dovina 20-Feb-06/1:29 PM
I really like this one. The third stanza is perfect, but I don't like the garage door.
Re: a comment on Valentine by zodiac 13-Feb-06/1:48 PM
Masters at pop music. The good kind.
Re: Valentine by zodiac 13-Feb-06/1:04 PM
You're Carl newman from the New Pornographers aren't you..
Re: Panic Slide by MacFrantic 13-Feb-06/12:57 PM
I'd like to see this formed into a more cohesive...um..thing..
Re: Unless Redux by rahson_s 13-Feb-06/12:50 PM
I've seen you do better, but not bad. I think, though, if you're going to throw out the racial slurs, just go ahead and say niggers. "Niggas" makes it seem like you're trying to skirt the issue and use slang instead.


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