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San Franscisco (Limerick) by John Rambo A fairy from Frisco named Bobby
Loved having the rauchiest hobby.
He'd take men on a date
And then spooge on their plate
While his dog licked his arse in the lobby.
Up the ladder:
A Proclamation to Our Lord
Down the ladder:
Mavis Beacon, Human.
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Posted: May 21, 2006 2:21 PM PDT; Last modified: May 21, 2006 2:21 PM PDTWeighted score: 5.286087 Overall Rank: 3732 The following users have marked this poem on their favorites list:
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Edna Sweetlove @ 81.178.123.42
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21-May-06/4:40 PM
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The standard of limerick-writing here is f*cking abysmal, yet this is not at all bad. Not excellent (see my own wondrous limericks) but good. I would give it 10 except I haven't the faintest idea what "spooge" means. I suppose I could google it but why waste my time? Do you mean splooge? Or spunk?
That's funny
Jesus WORSHIPS this!
This is a lovely poem. I think you should post it at another website I sometimes go to: http://poetryaddicts.pcriot.com/forum/ - it would be much loved there as indeed would you.....
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