poemranker ::No choice in the matter by cedand1

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Free verse № 106049

No choice in the matter

Member since 2004 · Posted 21 Jun 2004 · 3 comments

Pigeons take their place, perched on your shoulders Exposed to every passer-by, no need to take cover Chiseled and ripped, albeit a splendid blunder A hammer is required to tear asunder The plaster shell leaves an indelible imprint To keep you in the dark against your better judgment A tiny crack feeds air to your brain No sunshine penetrates, yet no shame Stiff and arthritic, you haven't shifted in years Your life is no longer your own to steer People decorate you on Christmas Eve Play dress-up with you on Halloween No choice in the matter, no voice of variety Staid and conformist, a product of society

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3 comments

[10] sliver 21-Jun-04/8:00 PM Reply
Yea, we've got a few of those poor fellows here in Colorado Springs too. Sucks to be a statue.
[9] MacFrantic 21-Jun-04/8:24 PM Reply
Almost had it for a street performer... Statue!? Oh!
*heh* *9.166666666666666666666666666666667*
[9] arduinn 21-Jun-04/11:33 PM Reply
dude.. you are good. keep it up...