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Re: Game Over by nentwined nypoet22 0:0:0:0:0:0:0:1 24-Mar-21/10:22 AM
last stanza not necessary, trying to be too broad. stick with the image and stop where it stops.
Re: "Threenager" by nypoet22 Dovina 0:0:0:0:0:0:0:1 10-Apr-21/10:50 AM
they carry a boy to his first filled lungs--it works well. his confusion unresolved . . . too late to say goodbye--rather glib, I think.
Re: nothing to say by nentwined Dovina 10-Apr-21/10:54 AM
ah, not so, not so, not so. much to say, just play, I say some holds sway, some sinks away take the fun, don't run, you're no bum
Re: HoboArmy Manifesto. by SupremeDreamer SupremeDreamer 25-Apr-21/2:58 AM
Eat a dick. ;D
Re: "Threenager" by nypoet22 SupremeDreamer 25-Apr-21/3:03 AM
69 gone wrong?
Re: nothing to say by nentwined SupremeDreamer 25-Apr-21/3:05 AM
the title sucks.
Re: Starting Over by impert&ent SupremeDreamer 25-Apr-21/3:10 AM
Why do you even mention children? For more sympathy? STFU. btw, don't anonymously hate you fucking cunt rag. Sign your name on it. Bitch.
Re: Game Over by nentwined SupremeDreamer 25-Apr-21/3:12 AM
I say take out the first stanza.
Re: Bats by Dovina SupremeDreamer 25-Apr-21/3:20 AM
Birds eating bats... interesting notion. Your political slant is rather noticeable.
Re: Bats by Dovina SupremeDreamer 0:0:0:0:0:0:0:1 25-Apr-21/3:20 AM
Birds eating bats... interesting notion. Your political slant is rather noticeable.
Re: Waking Up by Edna Sweetlove SupremeDreamer 0:0:0:0:0:0:0:1 25-Apr-21/3:22 AM
"done up both her holes"? nice... except the context is fucked. Unlike you.
Re: Waking Up by Edna Sweetlove SupremeDreamer 0:0:0:0:0:0:0:1 25-Apr-21/3:27 AM
conny lingers 0:0:0:0:0:0:0:1 10 March 10, 2021 9:17 AM PST Anonymous 10 February 11, 2021 11:00 AM PST Engelbert Humpalot 0:0:0:0:0:0:0:1 10 February 3, 2021 7:30 AM PST Anonymous 0:0:0:0:0:0:0:1 10 January 14, 2021 10:19 AM PST YOU ARE A SAD EXCUSE FOR A POET!
Re: False Memory by nentwined Dovina 0:0:0:0:0:0:0:1 23-Jun-21/12:03 PM
You call it "false memory" and I hope it is. Otherwise it's a morbid, but uniquely phrased, look back. Perhaps a mind like mine; it can go either way.
Re: Bats by Dovina impert&ent 0:0:0:0:0:0:0:1 21-Jul-21/9:56 AM
Shear numbers; they're in for a haircut, a scalping. Shearing flight, slicing the air. Shearing numbers: as immortalised by Kerouac. And as always he leaned his blind head on his pale hand, all ears opened like the ears of an elephant, listening to the American sounds and mastering them for his own English summer's-night use. Then they urged him to get up and play. He did. He played innumerable choruses with amazing chords that mounted higher and higher till the sweat splashed all over the piano and everybody listened in awe and fright. They led him off the stand after an hour. He went back to his dark corner, old God Shearing, and the boys said, 'There ain't nothin left after that.
Re: SHIT WORSHIP by Big Cock Charlie rabbi sammy schtupp 24-Aug-21/9:04 AM
OY VAY! This is the most horrible thing I have ever read already! I love it.
Re: Colin's thoughts by colin douglas's arse rabbi sammy schtupp 24-Aug-21/9:05 AM
Not very kosher!
Re: Don't touch the chairs in a gay bar. by Stephen Robins rabbi sammy schtupp 0:0:0:0:0:0:0:1 24-Aug-21/9:06 AM
Very witty
Re: the perils of internet dating by conny lingers rabbi sammy schtupp 24-Aug-21/9:09 AM
Oy vay!
Re: Ginger Cascade by impert&ent impert&ent 0:0:0:0:0:0:0:1 4-Oct-21/4:05 PM
This is the first of the five. Nothing else has been written yet.
Re: Care-Home by pete Dovina 4-Feb-22/3:22 PM
A good tribute and also honest She was good at perspective and shading and stuff She was good with colour, but it wasn’t enough She must have been a good wife

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