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Re: Unsung American Dream by SupremeDreamer conny lingers 0:0:0:0:0:0:0:1 10-Mar-21/9:13 AM
Tripe.
Re: OI! The Brown Flame by SupremeDreamer conny lingers 127.0.0.1 10-Mar-21/9:13 AM
The rectal bit was good.
Re: Waking Up by Edna Sweetlove conny lingers 0:0:0:0:0:0:0:1 10-Mar-21/9:17 AM
How true!
Re: AFV by Count Flatula conny lingers 0:0:0:0:0:0:0:1 10-Mar-21/9:21 AM
DRIVEL
Re: Game Over by nentwined Dovina 0:0:0:0:0:0:0:1 11-Mar-21/12:21 PM
Dismal take on life. Everything ends in death. btw, a twist of the pliers fixed me faucet, and a piece of me torn away saved my life. I too have looked at it both ways.
Re: living stone by nentwined Dovina 127.0.0.1 11-Mar-21/12:30 PM
Peter writes, “As you come to him [Jesus], the living Stone—rejected by humans but chosen by God and precious to him—you also, like living stones, are being built into a spiritual house.” Is it a fancy flight, a metaphor? a fractal? or can consciousness be squeezed from a real stone, eons ago in some primordial soup?
Re: the edge of creation - spoken word by nentwined Dovina 127.0.0.1 11-Mar-21/12:35 PM
Climbing a mountain, my consciousness waned into delirium. and I could not fees my toes. Lack of thought unsought. Coming down, reality returned, and the end of one tow was black.
Re: nothing to say by nentwined nypoet22 0:0:0:0:0:0:0:1 24-Mar-21/10:20 AM
thanks for... well... nothing.
Re: Game Over by nentwined nypoet22 0:0:0:0:0:0:0:1 24-Mar-21/10:22 AM
last stanza not necessary, trying to be too broad. stick with the image and stop where it stops.
Re: "Threenager" by nypoet22 Dovina 0:0:0:0:0:0:0:1 10-Apr-21/10:50 AM
they carry a boy to his first filled lungs--it works well. his confusion unresolved . . . too late to say goodbye--rather glib, I think.
Re: nothing to say by nentwined Dovina 127.0.0.1 10-Apr-21/10:54 AM
ah, not so, not so, not so. much to say, just play, I say some holds sway, some sinks away take the fun, don't run, you're no bum
Re: HoboArmy Manifesto. by SupremeDreamer SupremeDreamer 127.0.0.1 25-Apr-21/2:58 AM
Eat a dick. ;D
Re: "Threenager" by nypoet22 SupremeDreamer 127.0.0.1 25-Apr-21/3:03 AM
69 gone wrong?
Re: nothing to say by nentwined SupremeDreamer 127.0.0.1 25-Apr-21/3:05 AM
the title sucks.
Re: Starting Over by impert&ent SupremeDreamer 127.0.0.1 25-Apr-21/3:10 AM
Why do you even mention children? For more sympathy? STFU. btw, don't anonymously hate you fucking cunt rag. Sign your name on it. Bitch.
Re: Game Over by nentwined SupremeDreamer 127.0.0.1 25-Apr-21/3:12 AM
I say take out the first stanza.
Re: Bats by Dovina SupremeDreamer 127.0.0.1 25-Apr-21/3:20 AM
Birds eating bats... interesting notion. Your political slant is rather noticeable.
Re: Bats by Dovina SupremeDreamer 0:0:0:0:0:0:0:1 25-Apr-21/3:20 AM
Birds eating bats... interesting notion. Your political slant is rather noticeable.
Re: Waking Up by Edna Sweetlove SupremeDreamer 0:0:0:0:0:0:0:1 25-Apr-21/3:22 AM
"done up both her holes"? nice... except the context is fucked. Unlike you.
Re: Waking Up by Edna Sweetlove SupremeDreamer 0:0:0:0:0:0:0:1 25-Apr-21/3:27 AM
conny lingers 0:0:0:0:0:0:0:1 10 March 10, 2021 9:17 AM PST Anonymous 127.0.0.1 10 February 11, 2021 11:00 AM PST Engelbert Humpalot 0:0:0:0:0:0:0:1 10 February 3, 2021 7:30 AM PST Anonymous 0:0:0:0:0:0:0:1 10 January 14, 2021 10:19 AM PST YOU ARE A SAD EXCUSE FOR A POET!


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