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hate (Free verse) by ts I hate u 4 wot u did 2 me,
The mths of hurt u put me thru,
At that time i wished i was dead,
But now i no i won instead.
I thort i knew u,
Ii thort u wa ok,but,
Thta nite everything changed,
You took it upon u 2 do wot u did,
Now i hope ur wracked with guilt.
You think u won, because,
It ddnt go 2 court
Truth is u didnt and soon ur day will come
When u'll regret wot uv done.
I wish u were DEAD,and,
Off this earth,
It would b ym pleasure 2 put u thru so much hurt,
So i can get on with all lifes worth
Revenge is sweet,
Revenge is great,
I'll get my revenge on u 1 day.
Up the ladder:
FHjk
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Votes: (green: user, blue: anonymous)
Arithmetic Mean: 3.2916667
Posted: November 16, 2002 11:26 AM PST; Last modified: November 16, 2002 11:26 AM PSTWeighted score: 3.3031003 Overall Rank: 13621 Comments:
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-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. @ 131.111.245.180
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16-Nov-02/12:08 PM
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You might consider replacing 'hate' with 'h8'
i hate you too. But with alot more fucking passion. bet money. word. 0. by the way. you need a puppy and a spanking.
Dear God. Please, please, PLEASE tell me the spelling mistakes were on purpose. PLEASE.
I liked the poem just not all the spelling errors
Was this a parody of poetry? Because if it isn't,
you are not serious about your craft. I have but one suggestion, toss it and try again.
Total shite
I've seen better things written in shit on public toilets.
Even without the ridiculous spelling errors you still have no originality and no rhyme scheme. I expect you'll enjoy this comment, however, as it will give the opportunity to write a poem about 'tht fkn btch hu slagd of mi poem, lyk.' Go on. Slag me off. I dare you. Utter tripe, and well deserving of being in the 'worst.'
trash - not worthy of a place in the bottom 20
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