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hate

by ts

Member since 2002 · Posted 16 Nov 2002 · 8 comments

I hate u 4 wot u did 2 me, The mths of hurt u put me thru, At that time i wished i was dead, But now i no i won instead. I thort i knew u, Ii thort u wa ok,but, Thta nite everything changed, You took it upon u 2 do wot u did, Now i hope ur wracked with guilt. You think u won, because, It ddnt go 2 court Truth is u didnt and soon ur day will come When u'll regret wot uv done. I wish u were DEAD,and, Off this earth, It would b ym pleasure 2 put u thru so much hurt, So i can get on with all lifes worth Revenge is sweet, Revenge is great, I'll get my revenge on u 1 day.

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8 comments

[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 16-Nov-02/12:08 PM Reply

You might consider replacing 'hate' with 'h8'

[0] Bachus 17-Nov-02/9:21 PM Reply

i hate you too. But with alot more fucking passion. bet money. word. 0. by the way. you need a puppy and a spanking.

[0] Tintagiles 2-Dec-02/7:15 PM Reply

Dear God. Please, please, PLEASE tell me the spelling mistakes were on purpose. PLEASE.

[5] Heather Dee 11-Sep-05/6:45 AM Reply

I liked the poem just not all the spelling errors

[1] Sisterwolf 28-Dec-05/11:55 AM Reply

Was this a parody of poetry? Because if it isn't,
you are not serious about your craft.
I have but one suggestion, toss it and try again.

[10] Edna Sweetlove 11-Jun-06/6:02 PM Reply

Total shite

[0] Ulterius 9-Sep-06/3:42 AM Reply

I've seen better things written in shit on public toilets.
Even without the ridiculous spelling errors you still have no originality and no rhyme scheme. I expect you'll enjoy this comment, however, as it will give the opportunity to write a poem about 'tht fkn btch hu slagd of mi poem, lyk.'
Go on. Slag me off. I dare you.

Utter tripe, and well deserving of being in the 'worst.'

[5] conny lingers 23-Jan-23/10:06 AM Reply

trash - not worthy of a place in the bottom 20