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hate (Free verse) by ts

I hate u 4 wot u did 2 me, The mths of hurt u put me thru, At that time i wished i was dead, But now i no i won instead. I thort i knew u, Ii thort u wa ok,but, Thta nite everything changed, You took it upon u 2 do wot u did, Now i hope ur wracked with guilt. You think u won, because, It ddnt go 2 court Truth is u didnt and soon ur day will come When u'll regret wot uv done. I wish u were DEAD,and, Off this earth, It would b ym pleasure 2 put u thru so much hurt, So i can get on with all lifes worth Revenge is sweet, Revenge is great, I'll get my revenge on u 1 day.

Sisterwolf 28-Dec-05/11:55 AM
Was this a parody of poetry? Because if it isn't,
you are not serious about your craft.
I have but one suggestion, toss it and try again.




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