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L.O.V.E.

Member since 2002 · Posted 12 Nov 2002 · 5 comments

where can i find the words to express what i feel for you.i try and try to find them but i never do, so i guess my love's to big to be expressed into small words.when am with you i feel a big gap filled in my soul.all my life i thought money and hoes were the only thing i needed in life. but when we fell apart i had all those things i thought i only needed.until i looked in the mirror and saw a reflection of you in my eyes.i cant do this anymore, i aint who i thought i was, all i think about is you when am kissing her. i picture its you the girl am holding tight during that movie feeding popcorn and sharing he straw with. your all i need in this world not money not fame not thes hoes. i dream of the day when ill say your more then just my friend more then just my girl and but more like my wife and soulmate.i love your eyes your laugh and your smile and your heart. so girl i guess i LOVE YOU i just hope you feel the same.......

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[0] poetandknowit 12-Nov-02/6:02 PM Reply

Please, use line breaks! And this sounds a bit too much like a greeting card.

[0] god'swife 13-Nov-02/1:53 AM Reply

I'm suprised you can write. Or did someome at church submit this for you?

[0] Tintagiles 13-Nov-02/6:43 AM Reply

I suspect you'd find them in the line breaks. This would explain why you never find love.

[0] razorgrin 13-Nov-02/6:44 AM Reply

god's wife, you use the term "write" very loosely. I'm guessing english isn't your first language, bxjay.

[n/a] christic1978 21-Mar-05/12:10 PM Reply

its really sincere, but you need to check over your work for missing words and such before submitting.