Free verse № 15038
Im different so what?
Keep Staring, i might do a trick
I dont really care what you think
Wow, i wear clothes and bracelets just like you
and i wear black, Whoop-dee-do
Oh my, you called me a Freak
ouch that hurt, no actually it was really weak
I may be kewl I may be Lame
but you dont talk ot me what a shame
Everything i do is stupid and dumb
Atleast i have fun, when your being a bum
I could go on for days on how you treat us
but i'll stop no because i must
6 comments
Not capitalizing I - i - is an affectation.
You must proofread or no one will take you seriously.
I understand your rage - but present it boldly done, and seriously done.
Spelling such as, Kewl always turns me off. Use the
English language, we all know what cool is.
Harness your emotions into well done form and they
can give heft to your work.
I'll stop "now" - instead of no?
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