poemranker ::Im different so what? by xblackstarsx

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Free verse № 15038

Im different so what?

Member since 2002 · Posted 13 Sep 2002 · 6 comments

Keep Staring, i might do a trick I dont really care what you think Wow, i wear clothes and bracelets just like you and i wear black, Whoop-dee-do Oh my, you called me a Freak ouch that hurt, no actually it was really weak I may be kewl I may be Lame but you dont talk ot me what a shame Everything i do is stupid and dumb Atleast i have fun, when your being a bum I could go on for days on how you treat us but i'll stop no because i must

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[4] pete 14-Sep-02/12:20 AM Reply
wouldn't worry about them ..... fuck 'em ! ...... 4
[1] LilMsLadyPoet 14-Jun-05/3:23 PM Reply
I have a motto...don't use puncuation at all or at least try to use it correctly. Why have commas, but no periods? Why have capital letters, but not capitalize I? Kewl? Should one take you seriously? Would a read over before you hit submit be asking too much? (Atleast) This piece is "Lame"...
[2] Sisterwolf 28-Dec-05/11:21 AM Reply
This sounds like a rant. Not to do with poetry, but anger. It looks hurriedly done and slapped together.
Not capitalizing I - i - is an affectation.
You must proofread or no one will take you seriously.
I understand your rage - but present it boldly done, and seriously done.
Spelling such as, Kewl always turns me off. Use the
English language, we all know what cool is.
Harness your emotions into well done form and they
can give heft to your work.
[0] annadoc 20-Apr-06/5:36 PM Reply
looks like typos intentional. Childish (meant to be?)
I'll stop "now" - instead of no?
[10] Edna Sweetlove 14-May-06/2:52 AM Reply
I assume this is intended to be illiterate childish rubbish in which case it succeeds. So 10/10 for beng worthless and puerile; 0/10 for anything else.
[10] Edna Sweetlove 18-Jun-06/5:48 PM Reply
Is this bad intentionally or are you just a moron?