Sisterwolf28 Dec 2005

This sounds like a rant. Not to do with poetry, but anger. It looks hurriedly done and slapped together.
Not capitalizing I - i - is an affectation.
You must proofread or no one will take you seriously.
I understand your rage - but present it boldly done, and seriously done.
Spelling such as, Kewl always turns me off. Use the
English language, we all know what cool is.
Harness your emotions into well done form and they
can give heft to your work.