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Im different so what? (Free verse) by xblackstarsx

Keep Staring, i might do a trick I dont really care what you think Wow, i wear clothes and bracelets just like you and i wear black, Whoop-dee-do Oh my, you called me a Freak ouch that hurt, no actually it was really weak I may be kewl I may be Lame but you dont talk ot me what a shame Everything i do is stupid and dumb Atleast i have fun, when your being a bum I could go on for days on how you treat us but i'll stop no because i must

LilMsLadyPoet 14-Jun-05/3:23 PM
I have a motto...don't use puncuation at all or at least try to use it correctly. Why have commas, but no periods? Why have capital letters, but not capitalize I? Kewl? Should one take you seriously? Would a read over before you hit submit be asking too much? (Atleast) This piece is "Lame"...




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