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Im different so what? (Free verse) by xblackstarsx

Keep Staring, i might do a trick I dont really care what you think Wow, i wear clothes and bracelets just like you and i wear black, Whoop-dee-do Oh my, you called me a Freak ouch that hurt, no actually it was really weak I may be kewl I may be Lame but you dont talk ot me what a shame Everything i do is stupid and dumb Atleast i have fun, when your being a bum I could go on for days on how you treat us but i'll stop no because i must

Edna Sweetlove 14-May-06/2:52 AM
I assume this is intended to be illiterate childish rubbish in which case it succeeds. So 10/10 for beng worthless and puerile; 0/10 for anything else.




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