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hate (Free verse) by ts

I hate u 4 wot u did 2 me, The mths of hurt u put me thru, At that time i wished i was dead, But now i no i won instead. I thort i knew u, Ii thort u wa ok,but, Thta nite everything changed, You took it upon u 2 do wot u did, Now i hope ur wracked with guilt. You think u won, because, It ddnt go 2 court Truth is u didnt and soon ur day will come When u'll regret wot uv done. I wish u were DEAD,and, Off this earth, It would b ym pleasure 2 put u thru so much hurt, So i can get on with all lifes worth Revenge is sweet, Revenge is great, I'll get my revenge on u 1 day.

Ulterius 9-Sep-06/3:42 AM
I've seen better things written in shit on public toilets.
Even without the ridiculous spelling errors you still have no originality and no rhyme scheme. I expect you'll enjoy this comment, however, as it will give the opportunity to write a poem about 'tht fkn btch hu slagd of mi poem, lyk.'
Go on. Slag me off. I dare you.

Utter tripe, and well deserving of being in the 'worst.'




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