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FHjk (Free verse) by Dark Angle i had this thing and it died
Up the ladder:
Beloved Infidel
Down the ladder:
hate
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Posted: October 17, 2002 5:53 PM PDT; Last modified: October 17, 2002 5:53 PM PDTWeighted score: 3.3145227 Overall Rank: 13620 Comments:
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Tintagiles @ 142.166.125.85
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17-Oct-02/8:50 PM
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This is either sheer genius or sheer idiocy. I really can't decide which.
Sorry, but I think it's idiocy. Listening to The Streets raises the same dilemma, but I think in that case the answer is genius.
yeah me too. my butler.o
You mustn't speak of Nigel that way. He's alive and well I can tell you. I snuck into his room last night after you fell asleep, I hope you don't mind.
brilliant in its simplicity and directness
or not but what the hell
that depends on whether it was a herpe or just a parakeet.???
I do like the simplicity. Like a zen koan though a bit shorter than most. Highly evocative, so many interpretations to be had from only 7 letters. Also, I like the no punctuation--no capitalizations.
It enhances the simplicity.
Very dull
have you tried Viagra?
As Jimmy Carr correctly pointed out: the reason old men need viagra isn't because they're impotent. It's because old women are so very ugly.
Too bad it took five years to reply to the comment. Old indeed.
Would you rather I hadn't replied at all?
Yes
This is better than it first appears. Since at first it appears to be shite, then this is not a great compliment.
TUT TUT TUT.still 7 though
There once was a man named d-Angle
whose dick couldn't find a quadrangle he'd pop a blue pill which made him quite ill but his mum was left quite tranquil
Puerile horsehit and so worthlessw I think you should post it at my new website: http://www.newpoetryshared.proboards.com !
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