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FHjk (Free verse) by Dark Angle
i had this thing and it died


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Arithmetic Mean: 3.0714285
Weighted score: 3.0761971
Overall Rank: 13565
Posted: October 17, 2002 5:53 PM PDT; Last modified: October 17, 2002 5:53 PM PDT
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[5] Tintagiles @ 142.166.125.85 | 17-Oct-02/8:50 PM | Reply
This is either sheer genius or sheer idiocy. I really can't decide which.
[n/a] Nicholas Jones @ 137.44.1.200 | 18-Oct-02/4:28 AM | Reply
Sorry, but I think it's idiocy. Listening to The Streets raises the same dilemma, but I think in that case the answer is genius.
[6] Bachus @ 24.126.113.154 | 18-Oct-02/1:14 PM | Reply
yeah me too. my butler.o
[n/a] god'swife @ 209.179.212.173 > Bachus | 18-Oct-02/1:19 PM | Reply
You mustn't speak of Nigel that way. He's alive and well I can tell you. I snuck into his room last night after you fell asleep, I hope you don't mind.
[8] Bill Z Bub @ 24.112.224.232 | 30-Nov-02/10:54 PM | Reply
brilliant in its simplicity and directness

or not

but what the hell
[6] Bachus @ 24.126.113.154 > Bill Z Bub | 30-Nov-02/10:58 PM | Reply
that depends on whether it was a herpe or just a parakeet.???
[8] Quarton @ 12.217.212.111 | 2-Dec-02/9:44 AM | Reply
I do like the simplicity. Like a zen koan though a bit shorter than most. Highly evocative, so many interpretations to be had from only 7 letters. Also, I like the no punctuation--no capitalizations.
It enhances the simplicity.
[1] Dreammaker1024 @ 204.39.37.145 | 3-Dec-02/11:45 AM | Reply
Very dull
[2] Robert K Foster @ 209.68.64.69 | 10-Dec-02/11:39 AM | Reply
have you tried Viagra?
[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. @ 80.47.120.22 > Robert K Foster | 14-Jul-07/6:43 AM | Reply
As Jimmy Carr correctly pointed out: the reason old men need viagra isn't because they're impotent. It's because old women are so very ugly.
Too bad it took five years to reply to the comment. Old indeed.
[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. @ 86.135.203.58 > Robert K Foster | 15-Jul-07/5:18 AM | Reply
Would you rather I hadn't replied at all?
[n/a] ==Doylum @ 84.71.149.30 > -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. | 28-Jul-07/7:18 AM | Reply
Yes
[2] Edna Sweetlove @ 85.211.243.48 | 5-Aug-08/8:33 AM | Reply
This is better than it first appears. Since at first it appears to be shite, then this is not a great compliment.
[7] OMOMOMOM @ 86.139.74.5 | 27-Oct-08/3:29 PM | Reply
TUT TUT TUT.still 7 though
[7] ARTIE @ 66.69.245.233 | 31-Mar-11/8:42 PM | Reply
There once was a man named d-Angle
whose dick couldn't find a quadrangle
he'd pop a blue pill
which made him quite ill
but his mum was left quite tranquil
[10] wDaphnew @ 85.210.6.129 | 31-Dec-11/8:59 AM | Reply
Puerile horsehit and so worthlessw I think you should post it at my new website: http://www.newpoetryshared.proboards.com !
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