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Beloved Infidel (Free verse) by ObiWonKn Listlessly creeping;
Lamenting, but always keeping
Track of every
thought
Blood still seeping
These dreams remain sleeping
Beloved
infidel
Discordant to your process
In your words
I could never confess
That would grant you access
Which you don?t deserve
I won?t crack under
duress
Arpeggios on your violin
Bad poetry in reams
What more can I say?
You?ve picked apart my schemes
Who else can you mesmerize?
Lies inside
prayers
Still choke me
Now absolved
Everything solved,
But has anyone
evolved?
Up the ladder:
Mask
Down the ladder:
FHjk
Votes: (green: user, blue: anonymous)
Arithmetic Mean: 3.32
Posted: March 16, 2002 1:15 AM PST; Last modified: March 16, 2002 1:15 AM PSTWeighted score: 3.331244 Overall Rank: 13619 Comments:
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16-Mar-02/1:21 AM
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I must be slow... I don't get the point.
okay i think that the poet is pissed or hurt.... im not real sure cus the poem dont make a whole lotta sence. oh well i give ya a 5 just cus u confussed the hello outta me.
Ok, this poem was just a bad excuse to use big words..Haha..That wasnt very nice of me to say but..It was OK so I will grant you a -7-
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