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Beloved Infidel (Free verse) by ObiWonKn

Listlessly creeping; Lamenting, but always keeping Track of every thought Blood still seeping These dreams remain sleeping Beloved infidel Discordant to your process In your words I could never confess That would grant you access Which you don?t deserve I won?t crack under duress Arpeggios on your violin Bad poetry in reams What more can I say? You?ve picked apart my schemes Who else can you mesmerize? Lies inside prayers Still choke me Now absolved Everything solved, But has anyone evolved?

SweetJuliet10 13-May-04/10:41 PM
okay i think that the poet is pissed or hurt.... im not real sure cus the poem dont make a whole lotta sence. oh well i give ya a 5 just cus u confussed the hello outta me.




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