Re: the edge of creation - spoken word by nentwined	Dovina 127.0.0.1	11-Mar-21/12:35 PM
Climbing a mountain, my consciousness waned into delirium. and I could not fees my toes. Lack of thought unsought. Coming down, reality returned, and the end of one tow was black.
Re: nothing to say by nentwined	nypoet22 0:0:0:0:0:0:0:1	24-Mar-21/10:20 AM
thanks for... well... nothing.
Re: Game Over by nentwined	nypoet22 0:0:0:0:0:0:0:1	24-Mar-21/10:22 AM
last stanza not necessary, trying to be too broad. stick with the image and stop where it stops.
Re: "Threenager" by nypoet22	Dovina 0:0:0:0:0:0:0:1	10-Apr-21/10:50 AM
they carry a boy to his first filled lungs--it works well. his confusion unresolved . . . too late to say goodbye--rather glib, I think.
Re: nothing to say by nentwined	Dovina 127.0.0.1	10-Apr-21/10:54 AM
ah, not so, not so, not so. much to say, just play, I say some holds sway, some sinks away take the fun, don't run, you're no bum
Re: HoboArmy Manifesto. by SupremeDreamer	SupremeDreamer 127.0.0.1	25-Apr-21/2:58 AM
Eat a dick. ;D
Re: "Threenager" by nypoet22	SupremeDreamer 127.0.0.1	25-Apr-21/3:03 AM
69 gone wrong?
Re: nothing to say by nentwined	SupremeDreamer 127.0.0.1	25-Apr-21/3:05 AM
the title sucks.
Re: Starting Over by impert&ent	SupremeDreamer 127.0.0.1	25-Apr-21/3:10 AM
Why do you even mention children? For more sympathy? STFU. btw, don't anonymously hate you fucking cunt rag. Sign your name on it. Bitch.
Re: Game Over by nentwined	SupremeDreamer 127.0.0.1	25-Apr-21/3:12 AM
I say take out the first stanza.
Re: Bats by Dovina	SupremeDreamer 127.0.0.1	25-Apr-21/3:20 AM
Birds eating bats... interesting notion. Your political slant is rather noticeable.
Re: Bats by Dovina	SupremeDreamer 0:0:0:0:0:0:0:1	25-Apr-21/3:20 AM
Birds eating bats... interesting notion. Your political slant is rather noticeable.
Re: Waking Up by Edna Sweetlove	SupremeDreamer 0:0:0:0:0:0:0:1	25-Apr-21/3:22 AM
"done up both her holes"? nice... except the context is fucked. Unlike you.
Re: Waking Up by Edna Sweetlove	SupremeDreamer 0:0:0:0:0:0:0:1	25-Apr-21/3:27 AM
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Re: False Memory by nentwined	Dovina 0:0:0:0:0:0:0:1	23-Jun-21/12:03 PM
You call it "false memory" and I hope it is. Otherwise it's a morbid, but uniquely phrased, look back. Perhaps a mind like mine; it can go either way.
Re: Bats by Dovina	impert&ent 0:0:0:0:0:0:0:1	21-Jul-21/9:56 AM
Shear numbers; they're in for a haircut, a scalping. Shearing flight, slicing the air. Shearing numbers: as immortalised by Kerouac. And as always he leaned his blind head on his pale hand, all ears opened like the ears of an elephant, listening to the American sounds and mastering them for his own English summer's-night use. Then they urged him to get up and play. He did. He played innumerable choruses with amazing chords that mounted higher and higher till the sweat splashed all over the piano and everybody listened in awe and fright. They led him off the stand after an hour. He went back to his dark corner, old God Shearing, and the boys said, 'There ain't nothin left after that. https://www.muziekweb.nl/en/Link/U00001105001/POPULAR/November-in-the-snow
Re: SHIT WORSHIP by Big Cock Charlie	rabbi sammy schtupp 127.0.0.1	24-Aug-21/9:04 AM
OY VAY! This is the most horrible thing I have ever read already! I love it.
Re: Colin's thoughts by colin douglas's arse	rabbi sammy schtupp 127.0.0.1	24-Aug-21/9:05 AM
Not very kosher!
Re: Don't touch the chairs in a gay bar. by Stephen Robins	rabbi sammy schtupp 0:0:0:0:0:0:0:1	24-Aug-21/9:06 AM
Very witty
Re: the perils of internet dating by conny lingers	rabbi sammy schtupp 127.0.0.1	24-Aug-21/9:09 AM
Oy vay!