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Re: And on and on and on by nentwined SupremeDreamer 127.0.0.1 17-Apr-18/10:58 PM
Hmm.
Re: "The Zebra's Hoofbeats" by Lenore SupremeDreamer 127.0.0.1 17-Apr-18/11:05 PM
I like your word play. The beginning was great... Then it got a lil tedious. I can tell the ending was an attempt to fit in with your title... Title comes last, don't be constricted by it. Six, but you got a ten in there.
Re: alcohol is home. by SupremeDreamer -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 127.0.0.1 19-Jun-18/4:55 PM
A profoundly silly piece. I can't be bothered to dig up the original Checkliste, but this bulgingly stupid offering certainly ticks a few dunce-boxes: [X] Arbitrary line breaks [X] Clerical errors [X] Cliched imagery (gazing out of window, pits of despair) [X] 'Depression' words (putrid, wretched, darkness) [X] Devoid of alliteration or any such linguistic embellishments [X] Devoid of rhyme [X] Devoid of simile, reification or any such literary devices [X] Devoid of wondrous or fantastical imagery [X] Drug reference [X] Melodramatic [X] Overabundance of ellipses [X] Pointedly unanswered questions [X] Self-obsessed -10-
Re: alcohol is home. by SupremeDreamer SupremeDreamer ::1 19-Jun-18/5:05 PM
It is a sad day that I must say that I miss my old nemesis!
Re: Makin' Bacon by NICKDRP NICKDRP 127.0.0.1 18-Mar-20/12:38 PM
Wonderful poem !!!!
Re: Makin' Bacon by NICKDRP NICKDRP ::1 18-Mar-20/12:45 PM
Its been years..and i know making bacon can be slow all you comments all your slurs means nothing..as we know snow and sleet sunday morn family love to talk and eat its all about the sizzle and not the meat when will you all learn stop analyzing the repeat off we go, making the bun tomato and cheese its all about fun good bye for good..love you all :)
Re: Makin' Bacon by NICKDRP NICKDRP 127.0.0.1 18-Mar-20/12:45 PM
Its been years..and i know making bacon can be slow all you comments all your slurs means nothing..as we know snow and sleet sunday morn family love to talk and eat its all about the sizzle and not the meat when will you all learn stop analyzing the repeat off we go, making the bun tomato and cheese its all about fun good bye for good..love you all :)
Re: bitrot by nentwined Dovina 127.0.0.1 21-Apr-20/10:27 AM
Thanks for keeping this forgotten place open and for giving me a lift.
Re: makin bacon by NICKDRP Dovina ::1 21-Apr-20/10:39 AM
I'm sorry th ebest is all you have. Better luck next time.
Re: A terzanelle on the subject of the moment by Adriaan Dovina ::1 21-Apr-20/10:42 AM
Not fond of the form. 7 for handling it and for saying something.
Re: protest chant by nypoet22 Dovina ::1 21-Apr-20/10:46 AM
Please don't say Soylent Green in the middle of a plague.
Re: Cannikin by Caducus Dovina 127.0.0.1 21-Apr-20/10:57 AM
Hey Caducus, are you out there? This place is like a graveyard. I took a long trip and come home to a graveyard.
Re: Jesus wept by amanda_dcosta Dovina 127.0.0.1 23-Apr-20/2:14 PM
Hey Mandy What's up?
Re: Weather poem 13b by nypoet22 nentwined 127.0.0.1 23-Apr-20/2:59 PM
I sure don't know. 13b?
Re: Birb by Aetius nentwined 127.0.0.1 23-Apr-20/3:00 PM
Poignant. I think I've been that bird.
Re: Year of the Cucumber by Dovina nentwined ::1 23-Apr-20/3:07 PM
I stumbled a little at "feel"/"feel with"... flows better without to me. (why wallah vs. voila? If you were a cucumber? :) ) "no wanderlust" might be "no lust for wander"? More food for thought than I expected.
Re: Lazy Pindaric Ode Blues by pete nentwined ::1 23-Apr-20/3:19 PM
definitely spoken.
Re: Everybody's Gone by impert&ent nentwined ::1 23-Apr-20/3:21 PM
damn. nailed it for me right now.
Re: Birb by Aetius Dovina 127.0.0.1 23-Apr-20/3:22 PM
How do you know what he was wondering? He wondered at the window--that's reasonable I often wonder at the window
Re: coming out by pete nentwined 127.0.0.1 23-Apr-20/3:23 PM
cute :)


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