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Care-Home (Free verse) by pete
They hung her paintings in the old people’s home
Everyone was kind, it made her smile
Her and Picasso were kin for a while
She was good at perspective and shading and stuff
She was good with colour, but it wasn’t enough
She died alone
But her pictures were shown
They talked about it for a year or two
How she danced and she sketched
And had her name on the posters
She had her name on her room so she wouldn’t get lost
Surrounded by dementia, that was the cost
She didn’t do love, that had got lost
To duty and convention
And did I mention
The War
The Second World one, that is
A picture painted by a friend
Hangs in the corner of one man’s room
He sometimes calls her name aloud
He thinks of his wife
He thinks of his wife
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Posted: January 23, 2022 8:30 AM PST; Last modified: January 23, 2022 8:30 AM PST
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She was good at perspective and shading and stuff
She was good with colour, but it wasn’t enough
She must have been a good wife