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HATE ME, LOVE (Free verse) by alvinb
How can I prove my love for you? All the time I talk to you... Time and time I show my love... Every slash I give my pulse... My heart is tired of loving... Everytime my tears is flowing... Loved one will you love me back? Or will you just throw my love? Vanquish my soul full of this... Envy to the world... ____________________________ READ THE LEFT SIDE FROM TOP TO BOTTOM...


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Arithmetic Mean: 6.0
Weighted score: 5.0474257
Overall Rank: 6928
Posted: March 5, 2008 6:07 PM PST; Last modified: March 5, 2008 6:07 PM PST
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[2] Dark Angle @ 68.96.82.200 | 12-Mar-08/1:42 AM | Reply
instead of writing a poorly drafted suicide note, why not write about the story behind what when wrong, that would be 100 times more interesting.
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