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Bats (Free verse) by Dovina
Executive orders fly from the White House like bats from a cave shear numbers confuse right-wing birds of prey the bats keep coming gobbling all they can in just a week from a four-year growth of insects hunger drives them from sequester the cause of nourishment ambushing prey with bites of sound birds come out to feed on bats and might succeed with fewer can’t decide which bat to chase driven by orders search and destroy satisfy a pent-up hunger

Up the ladder: anyway
Down the ladder: Perfectly Okay

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.0
Weighted score: 5.0
Overall Rank: 8063
Posted: January 28, 2021 2:55 PM PST; Last modified: January 28, 2021 2:55 PM PST
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[2] SupremeDreamer @ 127.0.0.1 | 25-Apr-21/3:20 AM | Reply
Birds eating bats... interesting notion. Your political slant is rather noticeable.
[2] SupremeDreamer @ 0:0:0:0:0:0:0:1 | 25-Apr-21/3:20 AM | Reply
Birds eating bats... interesting notion. Your political slant is rather noticeable.
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