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Moving On (Free verse) by Katie
Maybe if I believe, It all was just a dream I'll be able to move on And pretend it wasn't true love I swear I'm not crying It's just a simple tear a small memory of you when you were still here No longer can I dream Of white gowns with white lace Or that loving look I saw on your face The laughter has stopped Our love deceased My reason for being Can no longer be seen

Up the ladder: Late night
Down the ladder: you & you all congregators

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.0
Weighted score: 5.0
Overall Rank: 8070
Posted: January 18, 2005 2:37 PM PST; Last modified: January 18, 2005 2:37 PM PST
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