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Re: Makin' Bacon by NICKDRP NICKDRP 127.0.0.1 18-Mar-20/12:45 PM
Its been years..and i know making bacon can be slow all you comments all your slurs means nothing..as we know snow and sleet sunday morn family love to talk and eat its all about the sizzle and not the meat when will you all learn stop analyzing the repeat off we go, making the bun tomato and cheese its all about fun good bye for good..love you all :)
Re: Makin' Bacon by NICKDRP NICKDRP ::1 18-Mar-20/12:45 PM
Its been years..and i know making bacon can be slow all you comments all your slurs means nothing..as we know snow and sleet sunday morn family love to talk and eat its all about the sizzle and not the meat when will you all learn stop analyzing the repeat off we go, making the bun tomato and cheese its all about fun good bye for good..love you all :)
Re: Makin' Bacon by NICKDRP NICKDRP 127.0.0.1 18-Mar-20/12:38 PM
Wonderful poem !!!!
Re: a comment on alcohol is home. by SupremeDreamer SupremeDreamer 127.0.0.1 19-Jun-18/5:11 PM
And in that note, go eat a dick and promptly swab the poopdeck.
Re: alcohol is home. by SupremeDreamer SupremeDreamer ::1 19-Jun-18/5:05 PM
It is a sad day that I must say that I miss my old nemesis!
Re: a comment on alcohol is home. by SupremeDreamer SupremeDreamer ::1 19-Jun-18/5:01 PM
Well, you dark twat bastard! I bloody well missed you!
Re: alcohol is home. by SupremeDreamer -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 127.0.0.1 19-Jun-18/4:55 PM
A profoundly silly piece. I can't be bothered to dig up the original Checkliste, but this bulgingly stupid offering certainly ticks a few dunce-boxes: [X] Arbitrary line breaks [X] Clerical errors [X] Cliched imagery (gazing out of window, pits of despair) [X] 'Depression' words (putrid, wretched, darkness) [X] Devoid of alliteration or any such linguistic embellishments [X] Devoid of rhyme [X] Devoid of simile, reification or any such literary devices [X] Devoid of wondrous or fantastical imagery [X] Drug reference [X] Melodramatic [X] Overabundance of ellipses [X] Pointedly unanswered questions [X] Self-obsessed -10-
Re: "The Zebra's Hoofbeats" by Lenore SupremeDreamer 127.0.0.1 17-Apr-18/11:05 PM
I like your word play. The beginning was great... Then it got a lil tedious. I can tell the ending was an attempt to fit in with your title... Title comes last, don't be constricted by it. Six, but you got a ten in there.
Re: And on and on and on by nentwined SupremeDreamer 127.0.0.1 17-Apr-18/10:58 PM
Hmm.
Re: Life in the Z-Zone by T. Jonathron Remp SupremeDreamer 127.0.0.1 17-Apr-18/10:56 PM
/me farts.
Re: that time i asked about dying by nypoet22 SupremeDreamer 127.0.0.1 17-Apr-18/10:53 PM
Wtf is a tashlich mofo? I give it six. It's got more potential though.
Re: a comment on Bill of Rights on A4 by T. Jonathron Remp T. Jonathron Remp 127.0.0.1 1-Nov-17/10:54 AM
I'd hope.
Re: a comment on Bill of Rights on A4 by T. Jonathron Remp nentwined ::1 1-Nov-17/10:51 AM
I love you. :)
Re: a comment on Bill of Rights on A4 by T. Jonathron Remp T. Jonathron Remp 127.0.0.1 1-Nov-17/10:38 AM
For clarification: you.
Re: a comment on Bill of Rights on A4 by T. Jonathron Remp nentwined ::1 1-Nov-17/10:36 AM
It's a failure of the poem or myself, I don't care which. For me, this critique.
Re: a comment on Mother Mayday is Here to Stay (Stay Away!) by T. Jonathron Remp T. Jonathron Remp 127.0.0.1 1-Nov-17/10:36 AM
half.italian, totally.purposeless
Re: a comment on Bill of Rights on A4 by T. Jonathron Remp T. Jonathron Remp 127.0.0.1 1-Nov-17/10:30 AM
A message from all of us: Please understand something before you critique it.
Re: a comment on Making a Man by Christof Christof ::1 31-Oct-17/9:38 AM
Thanks Daniella. What brought you back to my poems after so long?
Re: Hollywood Is The Pits by Lenore T. Jonathron Remp ::1 17-Oct-17/3:20 PM
There is not one single causal strand of the many worlds multiverse that would not have a higher mean expected utility for its constituent beings in which this poem also exists -4-
Re: Pedophile by Lenore T. Jonathron Remp ::1 17-Oct-17/3:18 PM
If native plainsmen considered this poem to be a 12th elemental construct of reality, I would annihilate their genetic lineage entire with a hydrogen bomb -3-


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