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Re: a comment on alcohol is home. by SupremeDreamer SupremeDreamer 127.0.0.1 19-Jun-18/5:11 PM
And in that note, go eat a dick and promptly swab the poopdeck.
Re: alcohol is home. by SupremeDreamer SupremeDreamer ::1 19-Jun-18/5:05 PM
It is a sad day that I must say that I miss my old nemesis!
Re: a comment on alcohol is home. by SupremeDreamer SupremeDreamer ::1 19-Jun-18/5:01 PM
Well, you dark twat bastard! I bloody well missed you!
Re: alcohol is home. by SupremeDreamer -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 127.0.0.1 19-Jun-18/4:55 PM
A profoundly silly piece. I can't be bothered to dig up the original Checkliste, but this bulgingly stupid offering certainly ticks a few dunce-boxes: [X] Arbitrary line breaks [X] Clerical errors [X] Cliched imagery (gazing out of window, pits of despair) [X] 'Depression' words (putrid, wretched, darkness) [X] Devoid of alliteration or any such linguistic embellishments [X] Devoid of rhyme [X] Devoid of simile, reification or any such literary devices [X] Devoid of wondrous or fantastical imagery [X] Drug reference [X] Melodramatic [X] Overabundance of ellipses [X] Pointedly unanswered questions [X] Self-obsessed -10-
Re: "The Zebra's Hoofbeats" by Lenore SupremeDreamer 127.0.0.1 17-Apr-18/11:05 PM
I like your word play. The beginning was great... Then it got a lil tedious. I can tell the ending was an attempt to fit in with your title... Title comes last, don't be constricted by it. Six, but you got a ten in there.
Re: And on and on and on by nentwined SupremeDreamer 127.0.0.1 17-Apr-18/10:58 PM
Hmm.
Re: Life in the Z-Zone by T. Jonathron Remp SupremeDreamer 127.0.0.1 17-Apr-18/10:56 PM
/me farts.
Re: that time i asked about dying by nypoet22 SupremeDreamer 127.0.0.1 17-Apr-18/10:53 PM
Wtf is a tashlich mofo? I give it six. It's got more potential though.
Re: a comment on Bill of Rights on A4 by T. Jonathron Remp T. Jonathron Remp 127.0.0.1 1-Nov-17/10:54 AM
I'd hope.
Re: a comment on Bill of Rights on A4 by T. Jonathron Remp nentwined ::1 1-Nov-17/10:51 AM
I love you. :)
Re: a comment on Bill of Rights on A4 by T. Jonathron Remp T. Jonathron Remp 127.0.0.1 1-Nov-17/10:38 AM
For clarification: you.
Re: a comment on Bill of Rights on A4 by T. Jonathron Remp nentwined ::1 1-Nov-17/10:36 AM
It's a failure of the poem or myself, I don't care which. For me, this critique.
Re: a comment on Mother Mayday is Here to Stay (Stay Away!) by T. Jonathron Remp T. Jonathron Remp 127.0.0.1 1-Nov-17/10:36 AM
half.italian, totally.purposeless
Re: a comment on Bill of Rights on A4 by T. Jonathron Remp T. Jonathron Remp 127.0.0.1 1-Nov-17/10:30 AM
A message from all of us: Please understand something before you critique it.
Re: a comment on Making a Man by Christof Christof ::1 31-Oct-17/9:38 AM
Thanks Daniella. What brought you back to my poems after so long?
Re: Hollywood Is The Pits by Lenore T. Jonathron Remp ::1 17-Oct-17/3:20 PM
There is not one single causal strand of the many worlds multiverse that would not have a higher mean expected utility for its constituent beings in which this poem also exists -4-
Re: Pedophile by Lenore T. Jonathron Remp ::1 17-Oct-17/3:18 PM
If native plainsmen considered this poem to be a 12th elemental construct of reality, I would annihilate their genetic lineage entire with a hydrogen bomb -3-
Re: Crop Circle by Lenore T. Jonathron Remp 127.0.0.1 17-Oct-17/3:17 PM
This poem makes me want to be inside of a tree enveloped completely by tree matter and possibly choke on sap -8-
Re: Mad by Lenore T. Jonathron Remp 127.0.0.1 17-Oct-17/3:15 PM
This poem is so bad it's bad. I'd rather look at homeless knees for 10 minutes.
Re: If A Goat by impert&ent T. Jonathron Remp 127.0.0.1 17-Oct-17/3:13 PM
-0-, but +1 for not being actual face poison


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