Dovina
on A Song Of Waking by PsydewaysTears
3 Jun 2022, 12:33 PM
The birds, the birds, what finer form of life!
This is the first of the five.
Nothing else has been written yet.
Oy vay!
Very witty
Not very kosher!
OY VAY!
This is the most horrible thing I have ever read already! I love it.
20 at least
Shear numbers; they're in for a haircut, a scalping.
Shearing flight, slicing the air.
Shearing numbers: as immortalised by Kerouac.
And as always he leaned his blind head on his pale hand, all ears opened like the ears of an elephant, listening to the American sounds and mastering them for his own English summer's-night use. Then they urged him to get up and play. He did. He played innumerable choruses with amazing chords that mounted higher and higher till the sweat splashed all over the piano and everybody listened in awe and fright. They led him off the stand after an hour. He went back to his dark corner, old God Shearing, and the boys said, 'There ain't nothin left after that.
https://www.muziekweb.nl/en/Link/U000011
You call it "false memory" and I hope it is. Otherwise it's a morbid, but uniquely phrased, look back. Perhaps a mind like mine; it can go either way.
conny lingers 0:0:0:0:0:0:0:1 10 March 10, 2021 9:17 AM PST
Anonymous 127.0.0.1 10 February 11, 2021 11:00 AM PST
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Anonymous 0:0:0:0:0:0:0:1 10 January 14, 2021 10:19 AM PST
YOU ARE A SAD EXCUSE FOR A POET!
Making fake names to vote and comment on yourself is sad and pathetic... oh yeah, like YOU!
Making fake names to vote and comment on yourself is sad and pathetic... oh yeah, like YOU!
Making fake names to vote and comment on yourself is sad and pathetic... oh yeah, like YOU!
"done up both her holes"? nice... except the context is fucked. Unlike you.
Birds eating bats... interesting notion. Your political slant is rather noticeable.
Birds eating bats... interesting notion. Your political slant is rather noticeable.
I say take out the first stanza.