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SupremeDreamer on Starting Over by impert&ent 25 Apr 2021, 3:10 AM
Why do you even mention children? For more sympathy? STFU. btw, don't anonymously hate you fucking cunt rag. Sign your name on it. Bitch.
SupremeDreamer replying on Dicksbymail.com by SupremeDreamer 25 Apr 2021, 3:07 AM
Twat.
SupremeDreamer on nothing to say by nentwined 25 Apr 2021, 3:05 AM
the title sucks.
SupremeDreamer replying on "Threenager" by nypoet22 25 Apr 2021, 3:04 AM
Hey, you're still alive!
SupremeDreamer on "Threenager" by nypoet22 25 Apr 2021, 3:03 AM
69 gone wrong?
SupremeDreamer on HoboArmy Manifesto. by SupremeDreamer 25 Apr 2021, 2:58 AM
Eat a dick. ;D
Dovina on nothing to say by nentwined 10 Apr 2021, 10:54 AM
ah, not so, not so, not so. much to say, just play, I say some holds sway, some sinks away take the fun, don't run, you're no bum
Dovina on "Threenager" by nypoet22 10 Apr 2021, 10:50 AM
they carry a boy to his first filled lungs--it works well. his confusion unresolved . . . too late to say goodbye--rather glib, I think.
nypoet22 on Game Over by nentwined 24 Mar 2021, 10:22 AM
last stanza not necessary, trying to be too broad. stick with the image and stop where it stops.
nypoet22 on nothing to say by nentwined 24 Mar 2021, 10:20 AM
thanks for... well... nothing.
nypoet22 replying on Jerusalem the Golden by rabbi sammy schtupp 24 Mar 2021, 10:18 AM
not quite sure now, i'd have to see the different versions side by side. in any case, it gets me thinking. here's a quote from an article this week in the Atlantic: https://www.theatlantic.com/international/archive/2021/03/israel-election-benjamin-netanyahu/618358/ The Jewish people come out of the Holocaust with two different, contradictory sentiments. One is that we just have to survive, we can’t trust anyone, we need a strong army—we just need to survive. We saw what happened to us when we didn’t have a country of our own. The other sentiment is that we need to have liberal values, be part of the civilized world, in part because we know what happens to us when the world becomes uncivilized.
Dovina on the edge of creation - spoken word by nentwined 11 Mar 2021, 12:35 PM
Climbing a mountain, my consciousness waned into delirium. and I could not fees my toes. Lack of thought unsought. Coming down, reality returned, and the end of one tow was black.
Dovina on living stone by nentwined 11 Mar 2021, 12:30 PM
Peter writes, “As you come to him [Jesus], the living Stone—rejected by humans but chosen by God and precious to him—you also, like living stones, are being built into a spiritual house.” Is it a fancy flight, a metaphor? a fractal? or can consciousness be squeezed from a real stone, eons ago in some primordial soup?
Dovina on Game Over by nentwined 11 Mar 2021, 12:21 PM
Dismal take on life. Everything ends in death. btw, a twist of the pliers fixed me faucet, and a piece of me torn away saved my life. I too have looked at it both ways.
conny lingers on AFV by Count Flatula 10 Mar 2021, 9:21 AM
DRIVEL
conny lingers on Waking Up by Edna Sweetlove 10 Mar 2021, 9:17 AM
How true!
conny lingers on OI! The Brown Flame by SupremeDreamer 10 Mar 2021, 9:13 AM
The rectal bit was good.
conny lingers on Unsung American Dream by SupremeDreamer 10 Mar 2021, 9:13 AM
Tripe.
conny lingers on Ravings of a dreamer by SupremeDreamer 10 Mar 2021, 9:12 AM
Pretentious sludge.
conny lingers on Mississippi Burnin. by SupremeDreamer 10 Mar 2021, 9:11 AM
A bit dreary.