Re: a comment on "Threenager" by nypoet22	SupremeDreamer 127.0.0.1	25-Apr-21/3:04 AM
Hey, you're still alive!
Re: "Threenager" by nypoet22	SupremeDreamer 127.0.0.1	25-Apr-21/3:03 AM
69 gone wrong?
Re: HoboArmy Manifesto. by SupremeDreamer	SupremeDreamer 127.0.0.1	25-Apr-21/2:58 AM
Eat a dick. ;D
Re: nothing to say by nentwined	Dovina 127.0.0.1	10-Apr-21/10:54 AM
ah, not so, not so, not so. much to say, just play, I say some holds sway, some sinks away take the fun, don't run, you're no bum
Re: "Threenager" by nypoet22	Dovina 0:0:0:0:0:0:0:1	10-Apr-21/10:50 AM
they carry a boy to his first filled lungs--it works well. his confusion unresolved . . . too late to say goodbye--rather glib, I think.
Re: Game Over by nentwined	nypoet22 0:0:0:0:0:0:0:1	24-Mar-21/10:22 AM
last stanza not necessary, trying to be too broad. stick with the image and stop where it stops.
Re: nothing to say by nentwined	nypoet22 0:0:0:0:0:0:0:1	24-Mar-21/10:20 AM
thanks for... well... nothing.
Re: a comment on Jerusalem the Golden by rabbi sammy schtupp	nypoet22 127.0.0.1	24-Mar-21/10:18 AM
not quite sure now, i'd have to see the different versions side by side. in any case, it gets me thinking. here's a quote from an article this week in the Atlantic: https://www.theatlantic.com/international/archive/2021/03/israel-election-benjamin-netanyahu/618358/ The Jewish people come out of the Holocaust with two different, contradictory sentiments. One is that we just have to survive, we can’t trust anyone, we need a strong army—we just need to survive. We saw what happened to us when we didn’t have a country of our own. The other sentiment is that we need to have liberal values, be part of the civilized world, in part because we know what happens to us when the world becomes uncivilized.
Re: the edge of creation - spoken word by nentwined	Dovina 127.0.0.1	11-Mar-21/12:35 PM
Climbing a mountain, my consciousness waned into delirium. and I could not fees my toes. Lack of thought unsought. Coming down, reality returned, and the end of one tow was black.
Re: living stone by nentwined	Dovina 127.0.0.1	11-Mar-21/12:30 PM
Peter writes, “As you come to him [Jesus], the living Stone—rejected by humans but chosen by God and precious to him—you also, like living stones, are being built into a spiritual house.” Is it a fancy flight, a metaphor? a fractal? or can consciousness be squeezed from a real stone, eons ago in some primordial soup?
Re: Game Over by nentwined	Dovina 0:0:0:0:0:0:0:1	11-Mar-21/12:21 PM
Dismal take on life. Everything ends in death. btw, a twist of the pliers fixed me faucet, and a piece of me torn away saved my life. I too have looked at it both ways.
Re: AFV by Count Flatula	conny lingers 0:0:0:0:0:0:0:1	10-Mar-21/9:21 AM
DRIVEL
Re: Waking Up by Edna Sweetlove	conny lingers 0:0:0:0:0:0:0:1	10-Mar-21/9:17 AM
How true!
Re: OI! The Brown Flame by SupremeDreamer	conny lingers 127.0.0.1	10-Mar-21/9:13 AM
The rectal bit was good.
Re: Unsung American Dream by SupremeDreamer	conny lingers 0:0:0:0:0:0:0:1	10-Mar-21/9:13 AM
Tripe.
Re: Ravings of a dreamer by SupremeDreamer	conny lingers 0:0:0:0:0:0:0:1	10-Mar-21/9:12 AM
Pretentious sludge.
Re: Mississippi Burnin. by SupremeDreamer	conny lingers 0:0:0:0:0:0:0:1	10-Mar-21/9:11 AM
A bit dreary.
Re: Dicksbymail.com by SupremeDreamer	conny lingers 0:0:0:0:0:0:0:1	10-Mar-21/9:09 AM
This is a great poem! I love it!
Re: I'm a faggot by mrs smith	Engelbert Humpalot 127.0.0.1	6-Mar-21/11:04 AM
I laughed till I farted.
Re: i carry my midget by i love my midget	Engelbert Humpalot 0:0:0:0:0:0:0:1	6-Mar-21/11:02 AM
Great last line.