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the edge of creation - spoken word

by nentwined

Member since 2001 · Posted 22 Jan 2021 · Edited 22 Jan 2021 · 2 comments

climbing the mountain seeking the liminal dry and cold air breathing subliminal fishing for visions pixels and people streaming imagined quote inspiration fighting with dragons fasting an afterthought lack of thought unsought baseless knowledge (like God) eyes and ears and fears THREATEN ATTENTION everything's near bringing me back popping the stack here comes reality // orig: https://poemranker.com/poem-details.jsp?id=65514

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[8] Dovina 27-Jan-21/5:26 PM Reply
Rocky Mountain high
says John Denver
you not far from never
odd to introduce God
high elevation
work hard there
that's the high
[8] Dovina 11-Mar-21/12:35 PM Reply
Climbing a mountain, my consciousness waned into delirium. and I could not fees my toes. Lack of thought unsought. Coming down, reality returned, and the end of one tow was black.