Poemranker [Poem: the edge of creation - spoken word] [by nentwined] Wed Apr 24 00:24:16 PDT 2024

the edge of creation - spoken word (Free verse) by nentwined

climbing the mountain seeking the liminal dry and cold air breathing subliminal fishing for visions pixels and people streaming imagined quote inspiration fighting with dragons fasting an afterthought lack of thought unsought baseless knowledge (like God) eyes and ears and fears THREATEN ATTENTION everything's near bringing me back popping the stack here comes reality // orig: https://poemranker.com/poem-details.jsp?id=65514

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Up the ladder: Moat Man

Down the ladder: Some of us

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Arithmetic Mean: 6.0
Weighted score: 5.0474257
Overall Rank: 6917

Posted: January 22, 2021 4:52 PM PST; Last modified: January 22, 2021 5:01 PM PST
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[8] Dovina @ 0:0:0:0:0:0:0:1 | 27-Jan-21/5:26 PM | Reply

Rocky Mountain high
says John Denver
you not far from never
odd to introduce God
high elevation
work hard there
that's the high

[8] Dovina @ 127.0.0.1 | 11-Mar-21/12:35 PM | Reply

Climbing a mountain, my consciousness waned into delirium. and I could not fees my toes. Lack of thought unsought. Coming down, reality returned, and the end of one tow was black.

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