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OI! The Brown Flame (Other) by SupremeDreamer
eeek. Oi. I have shat myself silly. pour kerosene over me, lite me up perhaps then I shan't be so damn SMELLY!! ah.. my rectal drip has returned.

Up the ladder: fish eye pie
Down the ladder: The choices we make

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Arithmetic Mean: 2.3333333
Weighted score: 4.6821256
Overall Rank: 12123
Posted: November 29, 2006 10:53 AM PST; Last modified: November 29, 2006 10:53 AM PST
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[n/a] SupremeDreamer @ 75.35.231.137 | 29-Nov-06/10:53 AM | Reply
Boredome and Ignorance. Alas I'm held captive.
[n/a] Ranger @ 62.252.32.15 | 2-Dec-06/2:13 PM | Reply
You need an extra exclamation mark in line 5.
[n/a] Prince of Void @ 213.207.253.85 | 13-Dec-06/9:30 AM | Reply
it's really a good example for new structure poetry
[1] Edna Sweetlove @ 85.210.229.135 | 13-Feb-07/11:58 AM | Reply
Fucking awful
[n/a] SupremeDreamer @ 130.65.109.104 > Edna Sweetlove | 19-Feb-07/5:33 PM | Reply
'Twas the point you twat. Atleast I don't vote for meself, missy.
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