poemranker ::OI! The Brown Flame by SupremeDreamer

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OI! The Brown Flame

by SupremeDreamer

Member since 2003 · Posted 29 Nov 2006 · 6 comments

eeek. Oi. I have shat myself silly. pour kerosene over me, lite me up perhaps then I shan't be so damn SMELLY!! ah.. my rectal drip has returned.

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6 comments

[n/a] SupremeDreamer 29-Nov-06/10:53 AM Reply
Boredome and Ignorance. Alas I'm held captive.
[n/a] Ranger 2-Dec-06/2:13 PM Reply
You need an extra exclamation mark in line 5.
[n/a] Prince of Void 13-Dec-06/9:30 AM Reply
it's really a good example for new structure poetry
[1] Edna Sweetlove 13-Feb-07/11:58 AM Reply
Fucking awful
[n/a] SupremeDreamer › Edna Sweetlove 19-Feb-07/5:33 PM Reply
'Twas the point you twat. Atleast I don't vote for meself, missy.
[0] conny lingers 10-Mar-21/9:13 AM Reply
The rectal bit was good.