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eeek. Oi. I have shat myself silly. pour kerosene over me, lite me up perhaps then I shan't be so damn SMELLY!! ah.. my rectal drip has returned.
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2-Dec-06/2:13 PM
You need an extra exclamation mark in line 5.
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