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Ode to necrophilia (Free verse) by Bobjim Some people like to screw older people
But that is not my scene
Some people like granny porn
(mmmm.....granny)
sorry, where was I?
Um, anyway.
Lets just skip to the grand finale!
Necrophilia is good
Necrophilia is great
I like a piece of mouldy meat
In my....ass?
(one day I should learn to give a shit...)
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Posted: February 21, 2003 4:25 PM PST; Last modified: February 21, 2003 4:25 PM PSTWeighted score: 3.0833333 Overall Rank: 13623 Comments:
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Nanshe @ 67.84.174.185
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24-Feb-03/9:34 PM
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Wouldn't that lead to coprophilia?
bah. my necrophilia poems were much better. so were all the ones I wrote about unusual anal stimulation. bah again.
Not nearly enough zeros. At all. Here's one more for your count, though, young Bobby J.
last line's pretty funny.
I think you are relying on shock value to carry
your write. The lines "sorry, where was I", and "uh, anyway" really disturb the flow. Granny grinding and necrophelia are disturbing concepts that need to be offered with much more seriousness and devotion to art.
Are you a vegetarian?
How dare you!
I think you are... veggie burger anyone?
No! I gave up veggie burgers for Lent!
Are you trying to make the worst poem I've read? If so, you've succeeded. Besides the fact that the poem is sickening in its message, its design is shaky and crappy... I think I'm gonna go puke now.
Why thank you. That's just what I was aiming for.
You need to seek professional help...
agreed...
Bad bad bad
Have I read this before? Probably. In someone else's obituary perhaps!
Any form of necrophilia is good and pleasant and beautiful..The odors...ah, so noxious it is vibrantly erotic, kissing blue pale lips, cold and hard...anyways, great stuff, but this is just bare bones...You need more MEAT, and substance (potatoes)...my suggestion is this: go into the graveyard at night, and just sit there for a while, inhale the air, poke around, let the dead give you mental stimulation...then come back and tell us all about your exploits about necrophilia...God bless you, 666!
boring.old hat.make way for the new shit bu SHUUSIT!
Quite nice
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