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Ode to necrophilia (Free verse) by Bobjim

Some people like to screw older people But that is not my scene Some people like granny porn (mmmm.....granny) sorry, where was I? Um, anyway. Lets just skip to the grand finale! Necrophilia is good Necrophilia is great I like a piece of mouldy meat In my....ass? (one day I should learn to give a shit...)

Sisterwolf 28-Dec-05/11:05 AM
I think you are relying on shock value to carry
your write. The lines "sorry, where was I", and "uh, anyway" really disturb the flow. Granny grinding and
necrophelia are disturbing concepts that need to be offered with much more seriousness and devotion to art.




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