| Re: O say, can you see? by Dovina |
5-Jul-06/7:16 PM |
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Nice job there, D. I think you should take the "pop that cracker" line and turn it into a rap song.
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| Re: August 23, 1944 - 102 miles west of Paris by Ranger |
5-Jul-06/7:08 PM |
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| Re: sayndewicches by FreeFormFixation |
5-Jul-06/7:03 PM |
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These poems with no punctuation are starting to kick me in my ass. Good one, though.
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| Re: Songs of the hedge bird by ALChemy |
5-Jul-06/7:00 PM |
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You give me a poetry boner.
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| Re: Hugo by little_angel_maria |
5-Jul-06/6:57 PM |
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Can't really say anythnig that hasn't already been said in other comments. Don't want to be unoriginal with my commments, now do I? Basically, this just reads like a letter you's pass to someone in High School. That's not really something that the average Poemeranker user wants to read (unless it's directed at them). So, that being said, just try to work on setting yourself apart.
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| Re: The Angle of your Downfall by MacFrantic |
5-Jul-06/6:51 PM |
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Um..curiouser and curiouser? I'm going to give you the benefit of the doubt that you're trying to be cute there. THe lack of punctuation is bothersome as well. I dig the rest.
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| Re: Our Lady of the Rock by Zoe |
5-Jul-06/6:42 PM |
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The indentions are a little annoying, but not too bad. The poem itself is ace for the imagery and language. Subject matter is not really my cup of whiskey but I still like it just the same.
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| Re: Bedlam Bazaar by Zoe |
5-Jul-06/6:39 PM |
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The translating was a bit annoying. I suppose it wouldn't be if I were Welsh...of course, then the English might be annoying...basically I think that you's have to be bilingual in that aspect to enjoy it completely. My personal preference is that you use one or the other...but I'm just one man. You've got some really nice imagery here and it's enjoyable as it is.
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| Re: What? (Wot?) by ecargo |
5-Jul-06/6:34 PM |
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I have no idea what you're talking about, but it sounds good.
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| Re: Monsters by wilco |
25-May-06/9:31 PM |
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| Re: a comment on Monsters by wilco |
23-May-06/2:04 PM |
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Well, you have to be rated before you can be overrated.
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| Re: a comment on Monsters by wilco |
23-May-06/1:51 PM |
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Who's just trying to get by? I don't think you're getting it, but I'm glad you like it.
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| Re: a comment on Monsters by wilco |
23-May-06/1:50 PM |
Wow, comparing me to Jim Morrison and John Lennon at the same time. I'm flattered, but I don't really think so...well, maybe Morrison...he was horribly overrated.
Actually, the chorus and verses were written at different times. That's why it seems a bit off kilter.
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| Re: Split Me by Sunny |
22-May-06/8:55 PM |
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soooo, you're cutting the carrot...and while you're distracted by the flowers, the carrot takes it's revenge and starts cutting you!? I don't think that's what you were going for, but that's the first image I got and I think that's super.
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| Re: Seizures by Sunny |
22-May-06/8:49 PM |
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Never had a seizure, so I don't know..it sounds all right to me (the poem, not having seizures).
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| Re: Play ball he said by thepinkbunnyofdoom |
22-May-06/8:47 PM |
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I don't want to read this....I'll just give you a 5 and we'll call it even?
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| Re: Numbers add to nothing by Caducus |
22-May-06/8:43 PM |
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And millions of tax dollars wasted supporting some asshole for 34 years that could've been saved on his court date with 1 bullet.
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| Re: A Prayer For God's Soldiers As They Kill For Him by Edna Sweetlove |
22-May-06/8:34 PM |
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WOW! You ARE the most talented person on here! Are you George Bush?
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| Re: The balls of Thor by John Rambo |
22-May-06/8:30 PM |
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| Re: Urinating in the alley by John Rambo |
22-May-06/8:29 PM |
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nope...but a 2 just for being a sick bastard.
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