Comments bywilco, 41–60 back, including replies. Only comments on poems

on O say, can you see? by Dovina 5 Jul 2006, 7:16 PM
Nice job there, D. I think you should take the "pop that cracker" line and turn it into a rap song.
on August 23, 1944 - 102 miles west of Paris by Ranger 5 Jul 2006, 7:08 PM
ace
on sayndewicches by FreeFormFixation 5 Jul 2006, 7:03 PM
These poems with no punctuation are starting to kick me in my ass. Good one, though.
on Songs of the hedge bird by ALChemy 5 Jul 2006, 7:00 PM
You give me a poetry boner.
on Hugo by little_angel_maria 5 Jul 2006, 6:57 PM
Can't really say anythnig that hasn't already been said in other comments. Don't want to be unoriginal with my commments, now do I? Basically, this just reads like a letter you's pass to someone in High School. That's not really something that the average Poemeranker user wants to read (unless it's directed at them). So, that being said, just try to work on setting yourself apart.
on The Angle of your Downfall by MacFrantic 5 Jul 2006, 6:51 PM
Um..curiouser and curiouser? I'm going to give you the benefit of the doubt that you're trying to be cute there. THe lack of punctuation is bothersome as well. I dig the rest.
on Our Lady of the Rock by Zoe 5 Jul 2006, 6:42 PM
The indentions are a little annoying, but not too bad. The poem itself is ace for the imagery and language. Subject matter is not really my cup of whiskey but I still like it just the same.
on Bedlam Bazaar by Zoe 5 Jul 2006, 6:39 PM
The translating was a bit annoying. I suppose it wouldn't be if I were Welsh...of course, then the English might be annoying...basically I think that you's have to be bilingual in that aspect to enjoy it completely. My personal preference is that you use one or the other...but I'm just one man. You've got some really nice imagery here and it's enjoyable as it is.
on What? (Wot?) by ecargo 5 Jul 2006, 6:34 PM
I have no idea what you're talking about, but it sounds good.
on Monsters by wilco 25 May 2006, 9:31 PM
You can hear what this song sounds like played live here:

http://www.myspace.com/thefrayedwires
replying on Monsters by wilco 23 May 2006, 2:04 PM
Well, you have to be rated before you can be overrated.
replying on Monsters by wilco 23 May 2006, 1:51 PM
Who's just trying to get by? I don't think you're getting it, but I'm glad you like it.
replying on Monsters by wilco 23 May 2006, 1:50 PM
Wow, comparing me to Jim Morrison and John Lennon at the same time. I'm flattered, but I don't really think so...well, maybe Morrison...he was horribly overrated.

Actually, the chorus and verses were written at different times. That's why it seems a bit off kilter.
on Split Me by Sunny 22 May 2006, 8:55 PM
soooo, you're cutting the carrot...and while you're distracted by the flowers, the carrot takes it's revenge and starts cutting you!? I don't think that's what you were going for, but that's the first image I got and I think that's super.
on Seizures by Sunny 22 May 2006, 8:49 PM
Never had a seizure, so I don't know..it sounds all right to me (the poem, not having seizures).
on Play ball he said by thepinkbunnyofdoom 22 May 2006, 8:47 PM
I don't want to read this....I'll just give you a 5 and we'll call it even?
on Numbers add to nothing by Caducus 22 May 2006, 8:43 PM
And millions of tax dollars wasted supporting some asshole for 34 years that could've been saved on his court date with 1 bullet.
on A Prayer For God's Soldiers As They Kill For Him by Edna Sweetlove 22 May 2006, 8:34 PM
WOW! You ARE the most talented person on here! Are you George Bush?
on The balls of Thor by John Rambo 22 May 2006, 8:30 PM
eh...
on Urinating in the alley by John Rambo 22 May 2006, 8:29 PM
nope...but a 2 just for being a sick bastard.