sayndewicches

Member since 2003 · Posted 3 Jul 2006 · 2 comments

sandwiched between waking life and a dream is the spot where you rest next to solace and safety, cradling light next to you like a baby. and although amusing, said spot is confusing. why hide wisen up stay inside. next to the floor near a crack in the boards is the spot where i sleep next to honesty tossed over shoulders to keep any chances aloft. sandwiched between waking life and a dream.

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[10] ALChemy 3-Jul-06/6:13 AM Reply

Caught the moment just right. Like reading Dr Suess on a bad acid trip.

[8] wilco 5-Jul-06/7:03 PM Reply

These poems with no punctuation are starting to kick me in my ass. Good one, though.