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sayndewicches (Free verse) by FreeFormFixation sandwiched between
waking life and a dream
is the spot where you rest
next to solace and safety,
cradling light next to you
like a baby.
and although amusing,
said spot is confusing.
why hide wisen up stay inside.
next to the floor
near a crack in the boards
is the spot where i sleep
next to honesty tossed
over shoulders to keep
any chances aloft.
sandwiched between
waking life and a dream.
Up the ladder:
Baggage
Down the ladder:
End of Me
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Posted: July 3, 2006 5:23 AM PDT; Last modified: July 3, 2006 5:23 AM PDTWeighted score: 5.119203 Overall Rank: 5901 Comments:
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ALChemy @ 71.75.188.128
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3-Jul-06/6:13 AM
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Caught the moment just right. Like reading Dr Suess on a bad acid trip.
These poems with no punctuation are starting to kick me in my ass. Good one, though.
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