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What? (Wot?) (Free verse) by ecargo This articulated day,
all light: a word;
air: breath and birds,
shaped and spoken.
Named.
Up the ladder:
Another quarter.
Down the ladder:
Help!
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Posted: July 5, 2006 12:56 PM PDT; Last modified: July 5, 2006 12:56 PM PDTWeighted score: 5.5006523 Overall Rank: 2677 Comments:
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wilco @ 24.92.74.122
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5-Jul-06/6:34 PM
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I have no idea what you're talking about, but it sounds good.
Is this some kind of a Genesis sequel? .... day, light, word, air, birds, breath, ......???
I'll remember to give this a proper read and vote tomorrow.
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