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Graveyards

by TwilightDawned

Member since 2004 · Posted 5 Jul 2004 · 2 comments

What is it about the graveyards that draw my vision in, Perhaps the damnation that is sought through the many tombstones, of innocents. Or the mere fact, that I will be there, six feet under - burried - alive.

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[8] Dovina 5-Jul-04/3:19 PM Reply
"alive" at the end adds several variations
Line 2: "that draws my vision"
Good
[7] Dan garcia-Black 6-Jul-04/11:37 AM Reply
A better than average effort. Buried. "Six feet" is less important than "under-buried." Cliches are as easy to fall into as falling off a log and down into a hole dug in a graveyard.