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Graveyards (Free verse) by TwilightDawned

What is it about the graveyards that draw my vision in, Perhaps the damnation that is sought through the many tombstones, of innocents. Or the mere fact, that I will be there, six feet under - burried - alive.

Dovina 5-Jul-04/3:19 PM
"alive" at the end adds several variations
Line 2: "that draws my vision"
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