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Graveyards
(
Free verse
) by
TwilightDawned
What is it about the graveyards that draw my vision in, Perhaps the damnation that is sought through the many tombstones, of innocents. Or the mere fact, that I will be there, six feet under - burried - alive.
Dan garcia-Black
6-Jul-04/11:37 AM
A better than average effort. Buried. "Six feet" is less important than "under-buried." Cliches are as easy to fall into as falling off a log and down into a hole dug in a graveyard.
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