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Our Lady of the Rock (Free verse) by Zoe
And the angel of the Lord found her by a fountain of water in the
wilderness, by the fountain in the way to Shur. And he said, Hagar,
Sarahâs maid, whence camest thou and whither wilt thou go?âGenesis
16.7-8
It wakes Sarah-the same bright yellow dawn
as on the boat that brought her
and coaxed her, onto deck to watch
white cliffs, the horizon.
She opens windows wide over the street:
these jostling roofs, the abbey:
spiked towers on the hill, its shrieks
out-stripping the swallows.
To stretch above and reach to wry brook-beds,
is watching close: a manâs step
(the bats squeal evening and night:
always the flapping wings).
The café where her sister sits; Hagar
at table, her black hair tied
round her head, coiled in feint of sleep,
proving her white bare neck.
Notice the flash of white cotton, the glare
at the window and how these
shutters close. The serene dun lulls,
gifts Sarahâs head with coils.
Then Sarah at table, still the cherub.
Their mother watched her mouthing,
jawing in the choirâs front row.
Hagar gets up to leave;
turning her face to the hotel she finds
inside the room is clean and
bare-the book and window agape.
Past the abbey, the grass,
grows wild, strands caught in cross-hatched breezes,
tips swirling: black and white dots
between TV channels. Angels
climb ladders to the spire.
Sitting cross-legged on the stone floor, dozing
like Jacob, cold was creeping
through her dress. The last mural is
crumbling: a woman
lifting dish to boyâs mouth and the other
watching with bow and bright shaft.
"Hagar and Sarahâ, he said in English
and the rhyme of steps followed her outside.
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Posted: July 5, 2006 5:09 AM PDT; Last modified: July 5, 2006 5:09 AM PDT
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