Re: Dust by Caducus	13-Mar-03/7:31 AM
very nice, first stanza rocks & the yourself more self repetition is brill. pickety-snickety: should in the quill not be with the quill?
Re: Assassin Nation by Blue Magpie	13-Mar-03/6:54 AM
bah the universe couldn't care less whether we oppress or progress or transgress but with every breath it is only to death it demands that we all acquiesce
Re: What Have You Swallowed by Fear of Garbage	13-Mar-03/6:47 AM
intricate and fractal. perhaps one day you can tell me what it means, for now I am content to turn it over and over in my hands and puzzle, watching for the light glinting off elusive facets.
Re: Fate by Dostoyevsky	13-Mar-03/6:08 AM
jingle jangle, words to mangle hist'ry with my shit be-spangle fate really doesn't give a fuck 'bout anything, it's all just luck
Re: i will not come to bangladesh by lost in america	13-Mar-03/5:59 AM
it's a great poem but I still have to limerick you: I think "lost in america"'s lost and would be wheree'r he was tossed he skipped Bangledesh and some chick's willing flesh because of the cultural cost.
Re: a comment on The Kansas City Chiefs suck by Jeremi B. Handrinos	13-Mar-03/5:54 AM
hoho, now... toy rocker's still rocking his toy as he has since he was a small boy it never gets sore but demands ever more until rocker must both hands deploy horus descends and preys like a hawk on po-ems he thinks are a crock is this god of birds a master of words? or just some guy wacking his cock! bawaahahahahahahahaha the Regurgitationist tackles Masturbatory Poetics
Re: a comment on On coming across a field of deer one afternoon (2) by <~>	13-Mar-03/4:51 AM
refers i believe to the camouflaged deer disappearing into the like-coloured landscape. clever.
Re: a comment on Falling Out Of Love by Sawa	12-Mar-03/6:07 PM
oh good, she came back. Should I comment on this one?
Re: March by <~>	12-Mar-03/5:47 PM
very nice...
Re: a comment on Icarus Down by horus8	12-Mar-03/5:33 PM
henh? this is excellent, can't you separate your enmity from your aesthetics? I shall limerick you: there's a guy here with scholarly socks who takes umbrage when anyone mocks his well crafted words for smelling like turds and thinks poetry's no place for cocks
Re: Remember-me (an ode to those dropped off at the clinic) by Bachus	12-Mar-03/3:47 PM
was bare bare instead of bear on purpose, or a typo? I hope on purpose, it made me laugh.
Re: Live by Luv2write	12-Mar-03/1:52 PM
hmmm, what will you be thinking, while you're squirming around inside the scapegoat christ, about the 95% of humans who ever lived that your god is torturing for no other reason than that they didn't dedicate their lives to satisfying his narcissism? Numbers 31, that's who you serve.
Re: The Wooden Armchair Of Similar Dreams by Caducus	12-Mar-03/1:39 PM
I liked this poem a lot but I sheepishly confess I'm still trying to puzzle out the meaning of the last stanza. Can I get a hint?
Re: a comment on We visited the gay men on the veranda by Frass	12-Mar-03/1:25 PM
Balthazar is wise and can rate Frass's true sexual state the bringer of myrrh doesn't concurr the dear writer really is straight
Re: esopus creek by unknown	12-Mar-03/1:16 PM
This poem fucking rocks. Oh wow. I grew up with such country in my backyard 'n' much time alone in it. nosTALgia, it's such a great drug. Although I suppose DA has a point. I'd say lurking instead of wriggling, but only because I'm a melodramatic fool. "still trying to reach up" could just be "still reaching" ??? I dunno. But I really like this poem, even if those really are flaws.
Re: a comment on The Wooden Armchair Of Similar Dreams by Caducus	12-Mar-03/12:52 PM
henh? there once was a fellow named smlink who scrabbled and smirked like a skink demanding better symbols and clashing his cymbals trying to hide his own poetry's stink
Re: Olden by smlink84	12-Mar-03/12:47 PM
vibrates between brilliance and pat nonsense rhymes like a schizophrenic man rapping. The last lines made me shiver, and I thought carcus must be some ancient obscure mythical boat. But a lot of googling reveals only mispellings of carcass.
Re: a comment on Drunk Satan by smlink84	12-Mar-03/12:30 PM
bwahahahah it was worth reading the above shite to get to read this comment.
Re: Waiting by Luv2write	12-Mar-03/12:18 PM
is your name Maud? just curious. Lynn?
Re: draft by daniella	12-Mar-03/11:47 AM
Oh, I like this. This is how I often feel about words, I feel like I want to punish the actual words themselves as if they had some punishable sentience.