on i will not come to bangladesh by lost in america
13 Mar 2003, 5:59 AM
it's a great poem but I still have to limerick you:
I think "lost in america"'s lost
and would be wheree'r he was tossed
he skipped Bangledesh
and some chick's willing flesh
because of the cultural cost.
I think "lost in america"'s lost
and would be wheree'r he was tossed
he skipped Bangledesh
and some chick's willing flesh
because of the cultural cost.
replying on The Kansas City Chiefs suck by Jeremi B. Handrinos
13 Mar 2003, 5:54 AM
hoho, now...
toy rocker's still rocking his toy
as he has since he was a small boy
it never gets sore
but demands ever more
until rocker must both hands deploy
horus descends and preys like a hawk
on po-ems he thinks are a crock
is this god of birds
a master of words?
or just some guy wacking his cock!
bawaahahahahahahahaha
the Regurgitationist tackles Masturbatory Poetics
toy rocker's still rocking his toy
as he has since he was a small boy
it never gets sore
but demands ever more
until rocker must both hands deploy
horus descends and preys like a hawk
on po-ems he thinks are a crock
is this god of birds
a master of words?
or just some guy wacking his cock!
bawaahahahahahahahaha
the Regurgitationist tackles Masturbatory Poetics
replying on On coming across a field of deer one afternoon (2) by <~>
13 Mar 2003, 4:51 AM
refers i believe to the camouflaged deer disappearing into the like-coloured landscape. clever.
replying on Falling Out Of Love by Sawa
12 Mar 2003, 6:07 PM
oh good, she came back. Should I comment on this one?
replying on Icarus Down by horus8
12 Mar 2003, 5:33 PM
henh? this is excellent, can't you separate your enmity from your aesthetics? I shall limerick you:
there's a guy here with scholarly socks
who takes umbrage when anyone mocks
his well crafted words
for smelling like turds
and thinks poetry's no place for cocks
there's a guy here with scholarly socks
who takes umbrage when anyone mocks
his well crafted words
for smelling like turds
and thinks poetry's no place for cocks
on Remember-me (an ode to those dropped off at the clinic) by Bachus
12 Mar 2003, 3:47 PM
was bare bare instead of bear on purpose, or a typo? I hope on purpose, it made me laugh.
hmmm, what will you be thinking, while you're squirming around inside the scapegoat christ, about the 95% of humans who ever lived that your god is torturing for no other reason than that they didn't dedicate their lives to satisfying his narcissism? Numbers 31, that's who you serve.
on The Wooden Armchair Of Similar Dreams by Caducus
12 Mar 2003, 1:39 PM
I liked this poem a lot but I sheepishly confess I'm still trying to puzzle out the meaning of the last stanza. Can I get a hint?
replying on We visited the gay men on the veranda by Frass
12 Mar 2003, 1:25 PM
Balthazar is wise and can rate
Frass's true sexual state
the bringer of myrrh
doesn't concurr
the dear writer really is straight
Frass's true sexual state
the bringer of myrrh
doesn't concurr
the dear writer really is straight
on esopus creek by unknown
12 Mar 2003, 1:16 PM
This poem fucking rocks. Oh wow. I grew up with such country in my backyard 'n' much time alone in it. nosTALgia, it's such a great drug.
Although I suppose DA has a point. I'd say lurking instead of wriggling, but only because I'm a melodramatic fool. "still trying to reach up" could just be "still reaching" ??? I dunno. But I really like this poem, even if those really are flaws.
Although I suppose DA has a point. I'd say lurking instead of wriggling, but only because I'm a melodramatic fool. "still trying to reach up" could just be "still reaching" ??? I dunno. But I really like this poem, even if those really are flaws.
replying on The Wooden Armchair Of Similar Dreams by Caducus
12 Mar 2003, 12:52 PM
henh?
there once was a fellow named smlink
who scrabbled and smirked like a skink
demanding better symbols
and clashing his cymbals
trying to hide his own poetry's stink
there once was a fellow named smlink
who scrabbled and smirked like a skink
demanding better symbols
and clashing his cymbals
trying to hide his own poetry's stink
replying on Drunk Satan by smlink84
12 Mar 2003, 12:30 PM
bwahahahah it was worth reading the above shite to get to read this comment.
on yellow verse by daniella
12 Mar 2003, 11:43 AM
nifty! (add "madly" to line 2 'n' it'd scan better)
on just as we were by daniella
12 Mar 2003, 11:34 AM
mmm, yummy. This is one of the few poems I've ever read which made me wish there was a version on video.
replying on AIDS in a van by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
12 Mar 2003, 10:50 AM
Sawa. She's from washington, and energetic. She wrote a rhyming poem about cherry trees or something, 'n' someone posted "nonsense. Stop rhyming until you know what you're talking about" and they were quite right 'n' I posted an example (non-rhyming) poem that used an image or word from each corresponding line of hers, but that actually made sense as a whole. She sent me a bitter comment and then deleted all her poems :(
hist'ry with my shit be-spangle
fate really doesn't give a fuck
'bout anything, it's all just luck