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yellow verse (Limerick) by daniella
there once was a girl named Gabriela who fell in love with a fella he got down on his knees and said pretty please, and she dropped her trunks, what the hella.

Up the ladder: Contempt
Down the ladder: Slaver

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.1666665
Weighted score: 5.121843
Overall Rank: 5605
Posted: November 18, 2002 7:17 PM PST; Last modified: November 18, 2002 7:17 PM PST
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[7] Caducus @ 62.105.88.10 | 19-Nov-02/3:04 AM | Reply
At last a limerick !
[n/a] daniella @ 200.80.154.47 > Caducus | 20-Nov-02/5:52 PM | Reply
don't know why but these thangs always remind me of my granfather.
[4] UnityMitford @ 167.206.181.179 | 19-Nov-02/6:51 AM | Reply
yes...at last...
[7] lastobelus @ 217.226.20.1 | 12-Mar-03/11:43 AM | Reply
nifty! (add "madly" to line 2 'n' it'd scan better)
[3] Edna Sweetlove @ 81.179.83.12 | 20-May-06/4:59 PM | Reply
Odd. Why was she wearing trunks? And what are trunks?
[n/a] daniella @ 127.0.0.1 > Edna Sweetlove | 8-Oct-17/7:38 PM | Reply
you are a troll indeed
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