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yellow verse (Limerick) by daniella

there once was a girl named Gabriela who fell in love with a fella he got down on his knees and said pretty please, and she dropped her trunks, what the hella.

lastobelus 12-Mar-03/11:43 AM
nifty! (add "madly" to line 2 'n' it'd scan better)




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