I WANT TO SEE MORE WORK LIKE THIS

poor taste!!!

There is a poems like this on the wall of the lavatory in the McNaughten Hotel in Fairfax. Did you write those too, or was it someone else?

hey ruella what are you doing in boys restrooms anyway

Yuck yuck yuck - just nothing here

Oh geez you're so sophisticated and witty. obviously open minded and well educated. you should go to a children's hospital and read that in the pediatric aids ward. I'm sure you would really make they're fucking day if not surely enlighten them.a

not enough effort or though went into this...

Ok that one isn't even funny.

i like your imagination.

A Limerick written by Dark Angel
so bland and without taste.
I hope you have time.
because reading this,
mine was a waste............

Good comment lol!!! Yeah your right I should really get a life! I guess I should think of others more instead of writing immature poetry right? lol see ya round asl?

you have a horrible mind!

you have a horrible face!

you are a very sick person my brother died of aids 2 years ago when he had a car crash his blood mixed with another persons u should think more about the poems you write before you post them you dont know how much pain u can cause someone your not even worth any words of violence you should just admit your self to the nearest mental hospital.

this is one lousy piece of work I have ever read in my life. You should be ashamed of your work

You should be ashamed of your bum

okay that was one smart comment,that is awful work,sure my work sucks too but yours,im just embarrased for you.

Not big, not clever, not entertaining. Controversial is one thing, poor poetry another.

Is big.

And here i return the compliment

you sick, sick man. Whats your fascination with the virus?

Actually, Ming, I know people who have AIDS. I'll thank you not to speak so lightly of such a serious disease. You are a disgrace to this site, a digrace to the human race, and a disgrace to yourself. But most of all, you are a disgrace...to America. USA! USA!

you are a very sick person my brother died of aids 2 years ago when he had a car crash his blood mixed with another persons u should think more about the poems you write before you post them you dont know how much pain u can cause someone your not even worth any words of violence you should just admit your self to the nearest mental hospital.

You idiots.. don't you understand anything. Its life. Live. Enjoy. Die. anyways..followers or failure. DarkA. I found it invoking, cautiously simulated within the wind of today's time and hour's friend. Cherrio.

Not more, I keep getting these!

heh heh....you funny

da, you really shouldnt let Ms Bog beat you out of the # last position... think of your reputation, you better get to work writting some more crap so people can vote you back down to where you belong!

nice.

go and die,have some mercy on me for god sake

And people blame me for being immature! Its sick.

Your'e a tasteless homophobe, you can't write worth a damn, and you're a right royal arsewipe. I'd stick a positive comment in there somewhere, but I can't seem to find one...

If 'AIDS in a van' was good, it would be good.

terrible

There once was some aids in a crayon.
but since i was not yet a man
It melted my nipple
(now called a schmipple)
coloring, was never that simple!

oh you did not just trash the gays..I'll learn your address. Your the one that deserves to be smited. MAN WHORE

okay, some fucked up shit here

* reading comments* LOL! woo! u ppl......!

I have no formal education in poetry, so could someone please illuminate me: I was under the impression the WHOLE FUCKING POINT of a limerick is to be as crass crude tasteless & politically incorrect as possible (& subsequently funny).

Jesus, have they started teaching in schools that you need to look for and evaluate the social message of FUCKING LIMERICKS? yer jest spost ta laff fer chrissakes.

I think this should be read to all new pupils at secondary school followed up by lessons on how not to drive whilst contracting the virus.

You need Jesus

After I read this poem and reading all of the comments I investigated for myself the origin of aids. It was actually a bacteria found in monkeys in south Africa, you wanna know how it came to America? Some sicko did a monkey in the bum, contracted the disease and then did his gay friend in the bum who then turned around and did about 25 others gay guys in the bum. Before you knew it gay people were havin sex with women durring their threesomes and gave it to them. So when the infected women did it with straight guys they got it too. All becuz some dude down in Africa got lonely and raped a monkey in the bum, now THAT is sick and disturbing. If all you people really think this is a horrible disease then you wouldnt stick up for gay people, what they do is unnatural and debase, more aids are passed between gay lovers then anyother source. I find it horrible that innocent people contract this disease and have to live with it. But that doesnt happen exponentially, what does happen alot is gay guys doing other gay guys up the bum. I cant for the life of me understand why anyone would think that homosexuality is normal, IT ISNT, waste comes out of your bum, a bum was not designed to have a wiener in it. What exactly does a penis in the bum do? Nothing! A penis goes in a vagina!!! Its that simple, you do it for making babies and populating the planet. IF the whole world were gay it would die and nothing would last very long. Two men cannot have kids, all they can do is have gay sex and spread diseases. Homosexuality is a mental disease, you are not born with it you slowly become it from what you do. PEOPLE think before you stand up for gay people, they dont need you to stand up for them, what they need is counseling becuase they are screwed up. They need love, just like any other person with problems.

Funny, but stupid funny

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This poem is just a shameless cash-in on the popularity of AIDS. -0-

The memory this brings would warrent me to sing as I remember a pair of gay pants. In a van they were found on top of a mound of other people's stuff. Indeed they had GAIDS but the owner was swayed not to believe anyone. Try as we could to show him he should go and retrieve his gay pants. All he did was rebuff the accusation of his stuff, and refused to move 'his' gay pants. No more could we take, for Jesu's sake, these infernal gay pants. We cast them asunder but this was a blunder as they spread the disease around.

WHat the hell, why did some people give this a 10. Geeze you people are frickin' crazy

real moving man.

um, somebody gave this a 10 because that is where the spinning wheel of his or her mouse landed. Do you not know that all voting on this site is arbitrary??? Well, maybe not all, because apparently there are some not with the program. here's my spin....

I give you a TEN... minus ten. Heh.

You're not a very nice person, and your poetry follows your attitude - it's not nice either.

I dont know who in their right mind would even consider giving THIS poem a 10..It's pure garbage..Thats all I can say..You Suck and Your Poem Sucks.. -0-

Ah, I couldn't help it. It actually made me smirk a little.

This "darkangel" is a literary genius. Leave him alone. He's clearly a bummer with no friends. Apart from his poetry. Which is incredible and should be published.
I assume you draw on some of the poetic greats of years gone by. If Byron were alive today, I truly believe that he would be tackling these very issues.

lol...

DAMN you got enough comments for this one, even though it sucks

Tut

'From having gay sex with a man'.

All my life I've been asking men: "Am I having gay sex with you, or hetero sex?"

By the way; does Nature still fabricate amoebae like Blindproject217? Gasp.

"If God had meant for men to have sex with other men then he would have put holes in their butts..." or so I've heard from certain individuals who've lost the ability to discern excrement from extreme snowboot shinola.

I'm sorry how old were you when you wrote this?

I'd just like to wish everyone on poemeranker a very happy World AIDS Day. (For those that don't know, the 1st of December is a very special time of year when people of all faiths and sexual orientations come together to celebrate AIDS.)

First, be adult enough not to answer my comment with some poisoned barb. . .
I do believe you achieved your goal - this little tit
has garnered more comments than decent ones.
I was a Hospice Nurse for 25 years and regard AIDS
with respect, presenting it in ways that will uplift and educate.

About as funny as 9/11. But less original.

Jesus SHITS on you!

You are a seriously cunty cunt.

There once was a poett named D'Angel
Whose words try to be quite playful
He'll work up a rhyme
tho' he'll often commit grime
'cause to others he's often quite hateful.