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Kittens and Pocket Money (Free verse) by Shuushin Itâs hard to tell what people want
anymore,
harder to tell what I want, really.
There are the obvious things, yes: threesomes and chocolate,
kittens and pocket money. A license to kill.
To be understood; verstanden, capito, compris â
yet to do so without changing the message,
that would be
nice.
Up the ladder:
Blah Blah
Down the ladder:
AIDS in a van
Votes: (green: user, blue: anonymous)
Arithmetic Mean: 3.2636364
Posted: October 5, 2003 7:10 PM PDT; Last modified: October 5, 2003 7:10 PM PDTWeighted score: 3.2636364 Overall Rank: 13625 Comments:
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Dan garcia-Black @ 67.122.15.18
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1-Dec-03/9:03 PM
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Angst-nog topped with a dash of nice. A great desert poem. Good work!
made me crack a smile I must admit
Thank you - glad for that!
Everyone thinks it...you wrote it...Outstanding
Garbage. But semi-intelligent garbage. I shall be generous and score it 1/10.
i can picture a certain droll, intelligent character on a certain TV show speaking this.
it also resonates, i think, with many, if not all, people. nicely done.
For once I can agree with Rockmage. It's probably what everyone on this site, in fact everyone everywhere, really wants and you have put it beautifully.
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