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Kittens and Pocket Money (Free verse) by Shuushin
It’s hard to tell what people want anymore, harder to tell what I want, really. There are the obvious things, yes: threesomes and chocolate, kittens and pocket money. A license to kill. To be understood; verstanden, capito, compris – yet to do so without changing the message, that would be nice.

Up the ladder: L.O.V.E.
Down the ladder: Im different so what?

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Arithmetic Mean: 3.293578
Weighted score: 3.293578
Overall Rank: 13604
Posted: October 5, 2003 7:10 PM PDT; Last modified: October 5, 2003 7:10 PM PDT
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[9] Dan garcia-Black @ 67.122.15.18 | 1-Dec-03/9:03 PM | Reply
Angst-nog topped with a dash of nice. A great desert poem. Good work!
[9] sonawrote @ 205.188.208.105 | 26-Jan-04/8:22 PM | Reply
made me crack a smile I must admit
[n/a] Shuushin @ 207.5.211.177 > sonawrote | 27-Jan-04/4:04 AM | Reply
Thank you - glad for that!
[10] Schrodinger's Cat @ 63.147.55.19 | 21-Feb-04/7:45 PM | Reply
Everyone thinks it...you wrote it...Outstanding
[1] Edna Sweetlove @ 85.210.25.78 | 18-Jun-06/5:43 PM | Reply
Garbage. But semi-intelligent garbage. I shall be generous and score it 1/10.
[9] lmp @ 141.154.134.3 | 26-Jun-07/5:05 PM | Reply
i can picture a certain droll, intelligent character on a certain TV show speaking this.

it also resonates, i think, with many, if not all, people. nicely done.


[10] Christof @ 62.121.23.56 | 27-Jun-07/6:17 AM | Reply
For once I can agree with Rockmage. It's probably what everyone on this site, in fact everyone everywhere, really wants and you have put it beautifully.
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