poemranker ::Kittens and Pocket Money by Shuushin

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Kittens and Pocket Money

by Shuushin

Member since 2003 · Posted 5 Oct 2003 · 7 comments

It’s hard to tell what people want anymore, harder to tell what I want, really. There are the obvious things, yes: threesomes and chocolate, kittens and pocket money. A license to kill. To be understood; verstanden, capito, compris – yet to do so without changing the message, that would be nice.

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7 comments

[9] Dan garcia-Black 1-Dec-03/9:03 PM Reply
Angst-nog topped with a dash of nice. A great desert poem. Good work!
[9] sonawrote 26-Jan-04/8:22 PM Reply
made me crack a smile I must admit
[n/a] Shuushin › sonawrote 27-Jan-04/4:04 AM Reply
Thank you - glad for that!
[10] Schrodinger's Cat 21-Feb-04/7:45 PM Reply
Everyone thinks it...you wrote it...Outstanding
[1] Edna Sweetlove 18-Jun-06/5:43 PM Reply
Garbage. But semi-intelligent garbage. I shall be generous and score it 1/10.
[9] lmp 26-Jun-07/5:05 PM Reply
i can picture a certain droll, intelligent character on a certain TV show speaking this.

it also resonates, i think, with many, if not all, people. nicely done.


[10] Christof 27-Jun-07/6:17 AM Reply
For once I can agree with Rockmage. It's probably what everyone on this site, in fact everyone everywhere, really wants and you have put it beautifully.