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Kittens and Pocket Money (Free verse) by Shuushin

It’s hard to tell what people want anymore, harder to tell what I want, really. There are the obvious things, yes: threesomes and chocolate, kittens and pocket money. A license to kill. To be understood; verstanden, capito, compris – yet to do so without changing the message, that would be nice.

Edna Sweetlove 18-Jun-06/5:43 PM
Garbage. But semi-intelligent garbage. I shall be generous and score it 1/10.




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