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Olden (Other) by smlink84
I sat there in my chair
Rocking back and fro,
I listened to the snares
Brought from the wings of a crow.
It first circled my chair
As I matched it's stare,
It came down in a graceful sweep
As it landed near my feet.
"Should you or Should I?" it asked
Sitting there I thought
"Should I what, let myself go,
And my mind trot ever so slow?"
I then beckoned a sneeze,
"Blessed is he"
I thought to myself,
"Delusional is me".
To my suprise,
It had brought me a message
It came on my shoulder
And told me,
"I am here for you
And it is time",
"Order of the faithful divine
Do not mistake me as a fine"
Laugh I did,
As you can guess
But had I known
I wouldn't have, I confess.
For the next moment
I started to see
The memories long forgotten,
And an old carcus,
Rocking on a wooden bottom.
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Overall Rank: 2724
Posted: January 16, 2003 9:05 PM PST; Last modified: January 16, 2003 9:05 PM PST
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