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Fresh faced Danger-Teen (Lyric) by INTRANSIT
My wheels are my first, last, and only line of defense. Life so young and intense. And I'll never recompense. Yeah, I'm a fresh faced Danger-Teen Did you see my magazine? Mom's not Martha Stewart And I have no time for love. I'm the king of my age group, my brain not fully gelled Hands and feet have swelled and I'll never catch hell. Yeah, I'm a fresh faced Danger-Teen Did you see my magazine? Dad's no Tom Cruise and I have no time for you. I can talk for hours and hours about nothing My life is made to preen Can you see my inner sheen? Yeah, I'm a fresh faced Danger-Teen Did you see my magazine? My brother's gone to college and I have no time for time. Life is short, play as hard as you can. Busy learning how to be a he-man But I just can't see my hands. Yeah, I'm a fresh faced Danger-Teen Did you see my magazine? My sister just overdosed and I have no time for her 'cos She's a fresh faced Danger-Teen innocent and pristine Did you see her magazine? Fresh faced Danger-Teen!

Up the ladder: Olden
Down the ladder: Fix it

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Arithmetic Mean: 6.857143
Weighted score: 5.4994626
Overall Rank: 2725
Posted: March 4, 2003 3:13 PM PST; Last modified: August 8, 2003 4:56 PM PDT
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Comments:
[9] Bachus @ 24.126.113.154 | 4-Mar-03/9:20 PM | Reply
Provocative and quite amusing.
[7] Mr Pig @ 62.105.88.10 | 5-Mar-03/9:45 AM | Reply
I say this is rather splendid but its a complete deviation from your other works, one feels however this more playful than a poem aimed to satiate.
Indulge yourself on a 7,
Jolly well done !
[9] deleted user @ 204.210.242.17 | 5-Mar-03/10:52 AM | Reply
these could be turned into successful song lyrics... :-)
[8] Caducus @ 195.92.194.16 | 8-Mar-03/2:57 AM | Reply
Lorasia has already made my point. The best man for commenting on this is Horus as you know he does diverse slam poetry this could be modified as song or slam, I would love to hear it aloud on an open mike. Thanx for you cmnts 8
[9] Bill Z Bub @ 24.112.224.232 | 8-Mar-03/10:05 AM | Reply
Yep, this would make an excellent song. Good work, man! 999skiddoo!
[7] Felzpoet @ 68.173.204.214 | 21-May-03/3:51 PM | Reply
thts good u seriously have too much power behind tht truck
[9] Luzr @ 24.209.21.223 | 8-Aug-03/5:18 PM | Reply
lol. I am a fresh faced danger-teen. -9- Very playful, Very witty.
[10] SupremeDreamer @ 204.31.161.55 | 8-Aug-03/6:19 PM | Reply
Fucking good.. i really like this poem. 10.
[n/a] poetandknowit @ 65.101.213.145 | 8-Aug-03/10:20 PM | Reply
I cannot believe I read that.
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