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Fix it (Sonnet) by Nanshe
With objectification reserved for my fetish,
Tiring of the need was the only salvo.
When I first forayed into pain as a cure--
An accelerant with an seductive allure--
I needed it like a drug, although
The thought of it made you squeamish.
You gave me exactly what I wanted,
Something you wouldnât choose on your own--
Pushing boundaries of pain-shaped skin,
You submitted and were made again.
Hard to soft and flesh to bone
You bore my harsh caresses undaunted.
But partnering me became a chore
That your dear flesh chose not to endure.
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Arithmetic Mean: 6.857143
Weighted score: 5.4994626
Overall Rank: 2726
Posted: April 7, 2003 7:03 PM PDT; Last modified: April 7, 2003 7:03 PM PDT
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