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Fresh faced Danger-Teen (Lyric) by INTRANSIT

My wheels are my first, last, and only line of defense. Life so young and intense. And I'll never recompense. Yeah, I'm a fresh faced Danger-Teen Did you see my magazine? Mom's not Martha Stewart And I have no time for love. I'm the king of my age group, my brain not fully gelled Hands and feet have swelled and I'll never catch hell. Yeah, I'm a fresh faced Danger-Teen Did you see my magazine? Dad's no Tom Cruise and I have no time for you. I can talk for hours and hours about nothing My life is made to preen Can you see my inner sheen? Yeah, I'm a fresh faced Danger-Teen Did you see my magazine? My brother's gone to college and I have no time for time. Life is short, play as hard as you can. Busy learning how to be a he-man But I just can't see my hands. Yeah, I'm a fresh faced Danger-Teen Did you see my magazine? My sister just overdosed and I have no time for her 'cos She's a fresh faced Danger-Teen innocent and pristine Did you see her magazine? Fresh faced Danger-Teen!

Caducus 8-Mar-03/2:57 AM
Lorasia has already made my point. The best man for commenting on this is Horus as you know he does diverse slam poetry this could be modified as song or slam, I would love to hear it aloud on an open mike. Thanx for you cmnts 8




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