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Fresh faced Danger-Teen (Lyric) by INTRANSIT

My wheels are my first, last, and only line of defense. Life so young and intense. And I'll never recompense. Yeah, I'm a fresh faced Danger-Teen Did you see my magazine? Mom's not Martha Stewart And I have no time for love. I'm the king of my age group, my brain not fully gelled Hands and feet have swelled and I'll never catch hell. Yeah, I'm a fresh faced Danger-Teen Did you see my magazine? Dad's no Tom Cruise and I have no time for you. I can talk for hours and hours about nothing My life is made to preen Can you see my inner sheen? Yeah, I'm a fresh faced Danger-Teen Did you see my magazine? My brother's gone to college and I have no time for time. Life is short, play as hard as you can. Busy learning how to be a he-man But I just can't see my hands. Yeah, I'm a fresh faced Danger-Teen Did you see my magazine? My sister just overdosed and I have no time for her 'cos She's a fresh faced Danger-Teen innocent and pristine Did you see her magazine? Fresh faced Danger-Teen!

Mr Pig 5-Mar-03/9:45 AM
I say this is rather splendid but its a complete deviation from your other works, one feels however this more playful than a poem aimed to satiate.
Indulge yourself on a 7,
Jolly well done !




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