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Falling Out Of Love (Free verse) by Sawa Awaken to scalpels cutting your skin
They open you wide with their hands
Remove your heart and
Lay a blade in its place
Bring you back together with
Twin rows of holes and black thread
A violated and strengthless body left to
Lick stitched wounds with a dry tongue
Up the ladder:
The Beautiful Lover
Down the ladder:
the game
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Posted: March 12, 2003 2:55 PM PST; Last modified: March 17, 2003 7:37 PM PSTWeighted score: 5.1490035 Overall Rank: 5234 Comments:
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<~> @ 167.206.181.179
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12-Mar-03/3:08 PM
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sister Sawa. it will not always be like this.
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lastobelus @ 217.226.20.1
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12-Mar-03/6:07 PM
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oh good, she came back. Should I comment on this one?
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<~> @ 67.87.76.32
> lastobelus
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12-Mar-03/6:15 PM
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at your own risk.
reverse your name, and add an h. awash, but with what? I feel a warm bath full of pink carnations and vanilla salt coming on. I just bought some plum scented candles too. I think i'll play my new album while I soak. It's called 'Jesus was Jew too so sue' by the Chirpets.
Seems better this time...THAEN AGAIN, I'M COMPLETELY FUCKING HAMMERED... URP. so fuck it. make it concrete and call it kentucky. lol.
What is love? Hmmmmmm.....it's still a foreign concept to me.
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