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Falling Out Of Love

by Sawa

Member since 2002 · Posted 12 Mar 2003 · Edited 17 Mar 2003 · 6 comments

Awaken to scalpels cutting your skin They open you wide with their hands Remove your heart and Lay a blade in its place Bring you back together with Twin rows of holes and black thread A violated and strengthless body left to Lick stitched wounds with a dry tongue

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[n/a] <~> 12-Mar-03/3:08 PM Reply
sister Sawa. it will not always be like this.
[n/a] lastobelus › <~> 12-Mar-03/6:07 PM Reply
oh good, she came back. Should I comment on this one?
[n/a] <~> › lastobelus 12-Mar-03/6:15 PM Reply
at your own risk.
[8] horus8 12-Mar-03/5:34 PM Reply
reverse your name, and add an h. awash, but with what? I feel a warm bath full of pink carnations and vanilla salt coming on. I just bought some plum scented candles too. I think i'll play my new album while I soak. It's called 'Jesus was Jew too so sue' by the Chirpets.
[8] Bachus 18-Mar-03/1:02 AM Reply
Seems better this time...THAEN AGAIN, I'M COMPLETELY FUCKING HAMMERED... URP. so fuck it. make it concrete and call it kentucky. lol.
[n/a] deleted user 18-Mar-03/3:12 AM Reply
What is love? Hmmmmmm.....it's still a foreign concept to me.