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Falling Out Of Love (Free verse) by Sawa

Awaken to scalpels cutting your skin They open you wide with their hands Remove your heart and Lay a blade in its place Bring you back together with Twin rows of holes and black thread A violated and strengthless body left to Lick stitched wounds with a dry tongue

horus8 12-Mar-03/5:34 PM
reverse your name, and add an h. awash, but with what? I feel a warm bath full of pink carnations and vanilla salt coming on. I just bought some plum scented candles too. I think i'll play my new album while I soak. It's called 'Jesus was Jew too so sue' by the Chirpets.




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