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Free verse № 47575

the game

by princesszoe

Member since 2003 · Posted 20 Apr 2003 · 12 comments

seeking, sought, souk He eyes him delicately, lustfully his hard exchanges look like intimate immediacy passion reached in not too long the deal is done and eagerly consented by the boy at the ba(zaa)r

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12 comments

[n/a] <{Baba^Yaga}> 20-Apr-03/11:44 PM Reply
"dislikes: rudeness, prejudice, inefficiency, ignorance, lateness, lies, war, pettiness, meanness and aubergines." I guess that pretty much leaves me out of the loop huh.

Odd that you would mention the bazaar though.
[n/a] princesszoe › <{Baba^Yaga}> 20-Apr-03/11:48 PM Reply
you again? god help me!

why odd about the bazaar?
[n/a] Jeremi B. Handrinos › princesszoe 21-Apr-03/2:20 PM Reply
Because, I was mixing a song for a friend of mine's reel the other day, and that was the environment in the song 'a bazaar' or where it was taking place (the story) that is.
[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. › Jeremi B. Handrinos 21-Apr-03/4:50 PM Reply
HOLY SHIT! LOL!! You mean -- the other day, you were mixing a song called 'a bazaar', and then -- get this -- you saw something else with the word 'bazaar' in it?!?!?!?! OMGOMGOMGOMG QUICK CALL STEVE MARTIN AND THE FIRE DEPARTMENT BECAUSE I HAVE JUST BURST INTO FLAME FROM EXCITEMENT AND ALSO IT IS THE COMEDY SENSATION OF THE MILLENNIUM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!11
[n/a] Jeremi B. Handrinos › -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 21-Apr-03/5:51 PM Reply
Hey dickless? the title of the poem is "the game", she posted it on top of a poem i posted last night, and thinkihg that she might be you or Settle fucking with me (because that bazaar song is on the web, and i assumed you might have heard it and were making fun of me and such) that i investigated out of sheer lack of sleep and paranoia, and discovered that indeed princes zoe is not dickless in the way that you are just a normal girl. so yes 11!!!!!!!!!!! LOMG! a sensational comedy. you are barely posh, and hardly comic, but what the hell call 911 spaz.
[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. › Jeremi B. Handrinos 21-Apr-03/8:05 PM Reply
The only songs of yours I have personally listened to for long enough to hear a complete lyric are your "interesting" rendition of "The Crutchling" and the one where god'swife is droning on about her uterus or something. But I'm sure Settle and the other members of Club -=Dark_Angel=- are big fans.

Also, I'm having trouble understanding "indeed princes zoe is not dickless in the way that you are just a normal girl." Well, not really, it just seems beyond even you to assert that princesszoe isn't a normal girl but -=Dark_Angel=- is, and the reason she isn't a normal girl is that her dicklessness is somehow a separate affair from her being female.

You get really peed off at sarcasm, I have noticed. Don't bother with the "haha man I was joking had you going" reply, because I have already written down exactly what it will say, so you will literally be jinxing yourself if you post it (taking into account the time difference) and you will have to wait for someone to say your name out loud, and they only have about a 1 in 600 chance of getting it right what with all the usernames you've commandeered.

TTFN
[n/a] princesszoe › -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 21-Apr-03/8:44 PM Reply
well guys thanks for the constructive comments on my work. i really appreciate your guidance!
[n/a] horus8 › princesszoe 21-Apr-03/11:38 PM Reply
Honestly if I thought there was hope I would offer. Sorry if I s(ee)m vague or ru(d)e.
[n/a] princesszoe › horus8 22-Apr-03/12:14 AM Reply
you seem extremely rude. you make me furious. please don't bother replying.
[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. › princesszoe 22-Apr-03/1:23 AM Reply
you seem extremely nude.
[n/a] horus8 › -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 21-Apr-03/11:35 PM Reply
Cute, but no, i'm not a p&k ha ha just kidding kind of guy, and it's 1 out of 5 chances, watch. GO FUCK YOUR FACE IDIOT, wow, i got it in one, amazing, and no i'm not kidding. Cripples dressed up as jestors covered in shit do not make much of a chess game for me these days. Pull out your comment for that.

TTFN

P.s. here's the missing comma.

""Indeed princes zoe is not dickless in the way that you are, just a normal girl.""

Jinxing myself? What are you 10? Peed off? How can you tell, by my phrasing or my choices of verbs? ( Now that my gaye little 4 by 4 buddy is sarcasm, take note. In case your doodles of gaye pyrgaits and vessels of hollowed out turds and bending gold encrusted badminton raquets blurs your ability to differ again.)
[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. › horus8 22-Apr-03/6:26 AM Reply
1. "GO FUCK YOUR FACE IDIOT" isn't one of your usernames.
2. It can't be you who unjinxes you.
3. That you have based your entire life on "Gilded Stumps of Olde" and slowly realised that it isn't the Bible of Ace isn't my fault.