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the game (Free verse) by princesszoe

seeking, sought, souk He eyes him delicately, lustfully his hard exchanges look like intimate immediacy passion reached in not too long the deal is done and eagerly consented by the boy at the ba(zaa)r

princesszoe 21-Apr-03/8:44 PM
well guys thanks for the constructive comments on my work. i really appreciate your guidance!




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